Green-Eyed Monster
Strikes Again!7 total reviews
Comment from JC Viper
Love the poem. It is so very true. I believe the Green Eyed Munster's in all of us at one point or another. I did enjoy the poem. Good Luck
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Love the poem. It is so very true. I believe the Green Eyed Munster's in all of us at one point or another. I did enjoy the poem. Good Luck
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I really appreciate you taking time to read and review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun flowing piece about you and your green-eyed monster -- quite entertaining! :) :) There were times that the rhyme seemed a bit forced, but, overall, a good smile! :) :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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A fun flowing piece about you and your green-eyed monster -- quite entertaining! :) :) There were times that the rhyme seemed a bit forced, but, overall, a good smile! :) :)
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you for such a nice review, I always appreciate it.
Comment from kahpot
Envy one of the strongest emotions to overcome even for the smallest of things, this is an excellent poem for this contest on sins, very well done with great artwork to compliment, best wishes in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Envy one of the strongest emotions to overcome even for the smallest of things, this is an excellent poem for this contest on sins, very well done with great artwork to compliment, best wishes in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this great review, it's always appreciated.
Comment from Van
oooh..careful that green-eyed monster of envy often times leads to a slightly darker shade of green... Greed. ;) Very nice submission. Excellent choice of color scheme and art. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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oooh..careful that green-eyed monster of envy often times leads to a slightly darker shade of green... Greed. ;) Very nice submission. Excellent choice of color scheme and art. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this nice review, I always appreciate hearing from fellow writers.
Comment from AprilViolet
Very funny and very true. Ryan Gosling is pretty good looking but we cant always get what we want! I enjoyed reading this poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Very funny and very true. Ryan Gosling is pretty good looking but we cant always get what we want! I enjoyed reading this poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much for this great review..always glad to hear from a fellow Ryan gosling fan. Thank you also for the six stars.
Comment from Gloria ....
Well mystery author in my opinion you have captured with great detail the essence of the worst and most destructive human emotion of all--envy. It is so utterly worthless, as it really provides no modest moment of enjoyment, but oh so powerful.
A fine write and excellent entry to the contest.
One small typo
my monster rears it's (its) ugly head ...
Best of luck with this fine entry.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Well mystery author in my opinion you have captured with great detail the essence of the worst and most destructive human emotion of all--envy. It is so utterly worthless, as it really provides no modest moment of enjoyment, but oh so powerful.
A fine write and excellent entry to the contest.
One small typo
my monster rears it's (its) ugly head ...
Best of luck with this fine entry.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much for the nice review and for pointing out the typo ...I really appreciate it.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A person should learn to be happy with what he's got. One day, my brother and I were driving through a gated community with big beautiful houses and expensive cars. He said, "Doesn't it make you mad to see how rich some people are?"
I said, "No, why?"
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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A person should learn to be happy with what he's got. One day, my brother and I were driving through a gated community with big beautiful houses and expensive cars. He said, "Doesn't it make you mad to see how rich some people are?"
I said, "No, why?"
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
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Brothers right? Although I have to say that I do get rather miffed when I see stuff like that...the green eyed monster again :). Thanks for taking time to read and review.
