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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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To quote a famous Space Ranger in the even more famous movie Toy Story: "you are a sad strange little man, and you have my pity"......JOKING, JOKING....but I have to wonder if there was a serious lack of caffeine at the morning watering hole up there in Michigan...? :) :) :) And, may I say that, even though you are true to your chosen rhyming scheme, that top picture messes with my brain -- the last one on the 5-7-5 was easy to discount, but this one is just plain scary....:) :) :P

Thank you for the wonderful smiles -- no spilled tea this time -- although the cats think I'm a little loopy talking to the monitor about this....LOL!

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Y, for the spirited review. I figured if they can cross an eleph@nt with some wholly mammoth DNA, they would dabble in this as well.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Yay, Bill! Those are some most iffy combinations and especially that major drumstick at the end. These are the things that make me happy I am a vegetarian even though a few funky things happen to them too.

Most amusing and fun poem. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
    Thank you, Gloria, for the upbeat review. Bill
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hahaha. I love the humor in this verse and the photograph is awesome! Love it. Great verse and rhyme. I like the flow and especially that its just so funny. Well done, Bill.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Sugarray, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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LOL! I'll have a thigh please. I'll be back next month to order another. I'll need 500 packets of honey mustard to go with my order. And a side of fries in proportion... just dump 'em in the bed of my pick-up truck.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
    We?ll need to get a truck-it of chicken. It?ll be chickephantastic!
Comment from frogbook
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Ha-very funny and clever especially with the accompanying pictures. Great rhyme in an entertaining package. Lots of images to bring to one's mind.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
    Thanks, FB
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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An elephant with a chicken? Whatever next Bill! A fun write and those who love chicken to eat could have a meat store for a whole year with your suggestions, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Ulla
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Hahahaha, Bill. Oh dear, I don't quite know what to think of that creature. Quite scary looking, if you ask me. Great poem and again full of good natured fun. All the best. Ulla:))

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
    Thanks, Ulla
Comment from damommy
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Hahahaha. That's quite a drumstick. Good picture, too, of the elephino.

I won't be surprised if someone does something of the sort. All kinds of weird things being done.

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
    Thanks, da