The Reason's Simple
Kids!14 total reviews
Comment from RFL
I give you this rating because your post is fun, author. I know kids and think this is real. I have been grappling with punctuation when I write dialogue and have received various advice. Wondering where you are coming from on this issue. Best, RFL
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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I give you this rating because your post is fun, author. I know kids and think this is real. I have been grappling with punctuation when I write dialogue and have received various advice. Wondering where you are coming from on this issue. Best, RFL
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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If you mean quotation marks, I used different colored fonts to show the different speakers. Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you thought it was fun.
Comment from Mark Valentine
Loved the last line - it's funny how kids can be so honest even when they're misbehaving. I'm sure this one will ring true to teachers and parents alike.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Loved the last line - it's funny how kids can be so honest even when they're misbehaving. I'm sure this one will ring true to teachers and parents alike.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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It's a true story. Children are so literal. They say just what they mean. Thank you, Mark, for reviewing this.
Comment from Cybertron1986
Beautiful. I think I recall something like this when I was in grade school. The entire conversation was on-point when it comes to teacher/student conversation. Witty and humorous ending. The entirety of this piece brings me back. Thank you for the long chuckle :)
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Beautiful. I think I recall something like this when I was in grade school. The entire conversation was on-point when it comes to teacher/student conversation. Witty and humorous ending. The entirety of this piece brings me back. Thank you for the long chuckle :)
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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I'm so glad I gave you a chuckle. When this happened, I laughed, too. Kids are so funny. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from trimple
Hello there, mystery writer
I enjoyed the simplicity of this story that focuses on the trivialities of children.
Love the humour as both the kids forget what's what n why's why n who's done what.
Great little punch [excuse the pun] at the end.
I wish you all the best in the contest
kind regards
trimple
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Hello there, mystery writer
I enjoyed the simplicity of this story that focuses on the trivialities of children.
Love the humour as both the kids forget what's what n why's why n who's done what.
Great little punch [excuse the pun] at the end.
I wish you all the best in the contest
kind regards
trimple
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Thank you, Trimple. Children often forget why they're mad at each other. They're so literal in their explanations, too.
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Indeed they are, my friend, indeed they are...
