Morning Wonder
A poem of 15 syllables15 total reviews
Comment from F. Wehr3
Very nicely done! I enjoyed the imagery created in such a short format. Congrats on your second place finish. I thought the competition was a tough one.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
Very nicely done! I enjoyed the imagery created in such a short format. Congrats on your second place finish. I thought the competition was a tough one.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 02-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Thank you. I also thought it was tough. It?s good to have great writers on this site. I appreciate your comments Russell.
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Thank you. I also thought it was tough. It?s good to have great writers on this site. I appreciate your comments Russell.
Comment from donette1914
very talented and so stunning!
I hope for the best in the contest
I love the artwork
It was an a honor to read your well penned work
and thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug,1 2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
very talented and so stunning!
I hope for the best in the contest
I love the artwork
It was an a honor to read your well penned work
and thank you for sharing
donette1914 Aug,1 2018
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I was inspired by the sun shining on the dew drops to write a poem about all of the diamonds in the meadow and we must not tell anyone of our discovery. If all of creation were sprinkled with diamonds it would glow & there would be enough to go around.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
I was inspired by the sun shining on the dew drops to write a poem about all of the diamonds in the meadow and we must not tell anyone of our discovery. If all of creation were sprinkled with diamonds it would glow & there would be enough to go around.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your lovely comments and review.
Comment from boxergirl
Good morning to you! I love your fifteen syllable message about creation. Great sensory imaging from your words like "coolness" and "glows" and also from the picture that you chose.
Blessings,
Karen
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
Good morning to you! I love your fifteen syllable message about creation. Great sensory imaging from your words like "coolness" and "glows" and also from the picture that you chose.
Blessings,
Karen
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from William Ross
yes it does, great job on the 15 syllable contest. I like the haiku form or style chosen on this, works out great. Good luck on the contest and have a great day
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
yes it does, great job on the 15 syllable contest. I like the haiku form or style chosen on this, works out great. Good luck on the contest and have a great day
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from JDRBAR
I really like the inspiration this evokes. However, I believe it could have a greater impact if you were to reverse dewdrop and morning. Good luck with this.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
I really like the inspiration this evokes. However, I believe it could have a greater impact if you were to reverse dewdrop and morning. Good luck with this.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thanks for the review and great suggestion. It does sound different that way.
Comment from Teri7
This is a truly wonderful 15 syllalble poem you have penned for the prompt. It is beautiful in presentation, your words and the lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
This is a truly wonderful 15 syllalble poem you have penned for the prompt. It is beautiful in presentation, your words and the lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
Everything about this post is lovely. Your photo is mesmerizing. but it is your images that make this so good. If there had been a contest for a four syllable poem, "Dewdrop morning" could have won it. What a nice way to see the world. And then you have creation glowing. Simply beautiful.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
Everything about this post is lovely. Your photo is mesmerizing. but it is your images that make this so good. If there had been a contest for a four syllable poem, "Dewdrop morning" could have won it. What a nice way to see the world. And then you have creation glowing. Simply beautiful.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you Debbie. I was out in a heavy dew yesterday morning and it covered everything and sparkled. I thought I would share the perception it made on me. I appreciate your lovely review.
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It was lovely
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely picture to accompany the picture formed through your words! Yes, sometimes dewdrops shine like jewels. I like how the poem expands from the single dewdrop morning to "all creation glows."
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
Lovely picture to accompany the picture formed through your words! Yes, sometimes dewdrops shine like jewels. I like how the poem expands from the single dewdrop morning to "all creation glows."
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review. I am glad you like it. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from kiwijenny
In the coolness of
a dewdrop morning,
all creation glows.
Beautiful pearls of words...like the picture
Well penned
God bless I enjoyed it
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
In the coolness of
a dewdrop morning,
all creation glows.
Beautiful pearls of words...like the picture
Well penned
God bless I enjoyed it
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2018
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Thank you Jen!!