Opposites Attack!
Agree to disagree...6 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
My favorite line is: "It's just too bad that I am right and he's too blind to see!" The ironies in this are so amusing. You have presented such vivid that the reader can feel as if they are in the kitchen with you and some will cheer him on and others will cheer you on. And that is the way of it. well written.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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My favorite line is: "It's just too bad that I am right and he's too blind to see!" The ironies in this are so amusing. You have presented such vivid that the reader can feel as if they are in the kitchen with you and some will cheer him on and others will cheer you on. And that is the way of it. well written.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review, its much appreciated.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with the prompt. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes. I wish the font were a bit darker in color. You gave many good reasons about his behavior that upset you. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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You did a good job with the prompt. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes. I wish the font were a bit darker in color. You gave many good reasons about his behavior that upset you. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review, I always appreciate hearing from fellow writers.
Comment from LynnetteOK
Some of the poems in this contest have made me wonder why the author is even with their significant other. It was truly refreshing to read one written with humor. There's always a flip side of the coin, which you showed wonderfully.
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Some of the poems in this contest have made me wonder why the author is even with their significant other. It was truly refreshing to read one written with humor. There's always a flip side of the coin, which you showed wonderfully.
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much, I appreciate your comments.
Comment from heart of Lou
Very funny! And I'm sure many of us can relate. It's so much more fun to be right than to be proven wrong! The picture goes well with the story too. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Very funny! And I'm sure many of us can relate. It's so much more fun to be right than to be proven wrong! The picture goes well with the story too. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for such a great review. :)
Comment from Therese103
Hahahaha! This is a great poem for the pet peeves contest! It flows well, and the rhyming is great. Also very humorous! I wish you well in the contest!
Blessings, Therese
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hahahaha! This is a great poem for the pet peeves contest! It flows well, and the rhyming is great. Also very humorous! I wish you well in the contest!
Blessings, Therese
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review.
Comment from Lady Jane
For me(,) the perfect man.
OH, how simply hilarious...how many spouses have this exact scenario playing out daily? MOST of us...LOL. This rhymed well, flowed easily, and was very finely displayed. My only suggestion would be to increase font and darken it just a tad. The image works well. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
janelle
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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For me(,) the perfect man.
OH, how simply hilarious...how many spouses have this exact scenario playing out daily? MOST of us...LOL. This rhymed well, flowed easily, and was very finely displayed. My only suggestion would be to increase font and darken it just a tad. The image works well. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
janelle
Comment Written 06-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking time to read, I really appreciate it. :)
