Coming Home
Use These Words Entry4 total reviews
Comment from heart of Lou
The picture is almost too cheerful and colorful for the sadness of the poem, but both are great. I pray for courage and strength for all parents who lose a beloved child. It must be so very hard.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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The picture is almost too cheerful and colorful for the sadness of the poem, but both are great. I pray for courage and strength for all parents who lose a beloved child. It must be so very hard.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Thank you for sharing your insights.
Comment from LynnetteOK
This poem expresses so much love that it made me tear up. Thankfully, both of my sons are still alive, but just the thought of losing one of them... I can't even imagine the pain.
This is a beautifully written tribute to sons who are gone and parents who are mourning.
LynnetteOK
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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This poem expresses so much love that it made me tear up. Thankfully, both of my sons are still alive, but just the thought of losing one of them... I can't even imagine the pain.
This is a beautifully written tribute to sons who are gone and parents who are mourning.
LynnetteOK
Comment Written 08-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for sharing your insights and sentiments.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Ohhh, no. I don't like this at all. It is superbly well-written and the message is a heart-stopper - especially since you've so cleverly hidden it until the final moment, but I just don't want to think about such things. This is a worthy entry -- good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Ohhh, no. I don't like this at all. It is superbly well-written and the message is a heart-stopper - especially since you've so cleverly hidden it until the final moment, but I just don't want to think about such things. This is a worthy entry -- good luck!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your sensitive review - some didn't get the implications of the last line. Appreciate very much your dropping by to read this piece. And I am honored by your exceptional rating!
Comment from Therese103
This is a very nice poem on a homecoming. You really did a great job on using the right words to make the reader feel the anticipation and joy of the train coming home. Well done! Blessings, Therese
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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This is a very nice poem on a homecoming. You really did a great job on using the right words to make the reader feel the anticipation and joy of the train coming home. Well done! Blessings, Therese
Comment Written 07-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review.
