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Comment from
Adri7enne
Such a shame that we don't take better care of this masterpiece. Nice rhymes, steady rhythm, enjoyable to read. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
Thank you for taking time to read and review.
Comment from
kaymart
An excellent entry!
I truly wish I could write poetry! I wanted to enter this very contest, but I just don't have that kind of writing in me! This reads and flows so well...
You do start out with a small case "he" and then began saying "He". In my opinion, any reference to God should be capitalized.
Just my humble opinion.
GOOD WRITING!
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018
Thanks for pointing out that error, I always appreciate the help. Thanks also for taking time to read and review.
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