Carnival
Creating memories!5 total reviews
Comment from Flyaway1
Cute. Do people even go to carnivals anymore? Occasionally, I see one and think about stopping.
I liked the use of colors to present each beginnings letter if the word you used. Made it bright and happy- a carnival of words.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Cute. Do people even go to carnivals anymore? Occasionally, I see one and think about stopping.
I liked the use of colors to present each beginnings letter if the word you used. Made it bright and happy- a carnival of words.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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I go to carnivals! :) Thanks for taking time to read and review.
Comment from AprilViolet
So colorful and fun! Exceptional entry into the contest! Love the picture you choose and how the different lines were a different bright color! Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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So colorful and fun! Exceptional entry into the contest! Love the picture you choose and how the different lines were a different bright color! Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this great review and for the six stars! :)
Comment from Renee J. St.Germain
This is such a fun poem! I love how you used different colors for each sentence. It captures the excitement of the carnival. This also flows nicely and the rhyming was fun to read. Hope you get to go to a carnival this summer. Anyways, I wish you the best in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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This is such a fun poem! I love how you used different colors for each sentence. It captures the excitement of the carnival. This also flows nicely and the rhyming was fun to read. Hope you get to go to a carnival this summer. Anyways, I wish you the best in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you for such a nice review! We are heading to the Minnesota state fair at the end of the month..yay! Thanks so much for taking time to read and review and for the six stars, it made my day.
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You're welcome! Have fun at the fair!
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent entry for the acrostic contest. The colorful picture and the brightly colored words create a wonderful carnival type venue. The poet did a fine job putting this work together. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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This is an excellent entry for the acrostic contest. The colorful picture and the brightly colored words create a wonderful carnival type venue. The poet did a fine job putting this work together. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from kahpot
Yes the fairs and shows do hold and provide everything you have said in this excellent poem a great entry for this competition with wonderful artwork, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Yes the fairs and shows do hold and provide everything you have said in this excellent poem a great entry for this competition with wonderful artwork, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2018
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Thank you, I appreciate your comments. :)
