Memory Eraser
When it's too painful to remember...53 total reviews
Comment from cajunjoe
Good luck in the writing prompt contest or whatever it is. I like the poem, I find it very sad and forlorn, and you have hit the habits of society right on the head. But it is very sad and touches the heart. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Good luck in the writing prompt contest or whatever it is. I like the poem, I find it very sad and forlorn, and you have hit the habits of society right on the head. But it is very sad and touches the heart. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much for reading my poem. I truly appreciate your opinion.
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You're welcome
Comment from jenintorre
A very well written poem with excellent rhyme. I think I could do with a bit of her potion from time to time. I wish you luck in the competition. Cheers Jen.
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A very well written poem with excellent rhyme. I think I could do with a bit of her potion from time to time. I wish you luck in the competition. Cheers Jen.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
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Me too..from time to time. Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from estory
The effect of these measured rhythms and echoing rhymes in neat couplets was one of listening to an incantation, so I think it was good use of the form to frame the theme. Nice images, those classic images of shadows and moon, potions, witches and ghosts, to send that agreeable creeping up the back. estory
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The effect of these measured rhythms and echoing rhymes in neat couplets was one of listening to an incantation, so I think it was good use of the form to frame the theme. Nice images, those classic images of shadows and moon, potions, witches and ghosts, to send that agreeable creeping up the back. estory
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review :)
Comment from Nanny 6
Awesome, splendid poem that incorporates all the words well into this fine crafted story... Your rhyme and rhythm flow so well that it was a fun read out loud, almost reminds me of poe's work. well done! good luck in the contest : )
Judy
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Awesome, splendid poem that incorporates all the words well into this fine crafted story... Your rhyme and rhythm flow so well that it was a fun read out loud, almost reminds me of poe's work. well done! good luck in the contest : )
Judy
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it , and I'm honored that you mentioned Poe, my favorite poet and author. Thank you also for the six star review, it made my day!
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Memory Eraser, uses the required words and supplants the world famous alcohol with the phantom elixir which renders the mind too weak to mull over bad memories. Nice and dark tone that may even be relatable.
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This poem, Memory Eraser, uses the required words and supplants the world famous alcohol with the phantom elixir which renders the mind too weak to mull over bad memories. Nice and dark tone that may even be relatable.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much for this nice review, I really appreciate it. Now what about those lion kittens? I'm looking forward to them.
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Have to get through ten Komodo dragon pieces first.
Comment from Robbie Yates
What a great piece. Your style is brilliant - simple and clear and yet it has a great impact. Your rhythm and metre are great, rhyme is brilliant, and the story you tell is fascinating. Well done and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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What a great piece. Your style is brilliant - simple and clear and yet it has a great impact. Your rhythm and metre are great, rhyme is brilliant, and the story you tell is fascinating. Well done and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind words...I landed in 3rd place. :). So many great entries in the contest.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What an awesome entry for this contest! The emotions you write about are very intense and your rhyming pattern is unique and makes the poem flows so well. Good luck in the contest. You have a solid entry!
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What an awesome entry for this contest! The emotions you write about are very intense and your rhyming pattern is unique and makes the poem flows so well. Good luck in the contest. You have a solid entry!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
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Thanks for reading and for this great review.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Mystery writer: I like how she can cast a spell with her beauty
and rhymes. She must be a depressed poet who lost her love.
Maybe, the muse needs to do some homemade cooking. Great
descriptions with the drink that makes him disappear. Her thoughts
are in a box...she must truly be grieving. Good contest entry, use
of words and rhymes.
flylikeaneagle
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Mystery writer: I like how she can cast a spell with her beauty
and rhymes. She must be a depressed poet who lost her love.
Maybe, the muse needs to do some homemade cooking. Great
descriptions with the drink that makes him disappear. Her thoughts
are in a box...she must truly be grieving. Good contest entry, use
of words and rhymes.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thanks for such a great review, I appreciate your comments. :)
Comment from bob cullen
This is really good. I loved the lost-love story you blended into the poem along with the suggested witchery. It was so appropriate to the splendidly chosen picture. The poem rolled so nicely one didn't really see the slotting in of the required words. A great entry and I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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This is really good. I loved the lost-love story you blended into the poem along with the suggested witchery. It was so appropriate to the splendidly chosen picture. The poem rolled so nicely one didn't really see the slotting in of the required words. A great entry and I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much.
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Eerie. I love it. You did a great job incorporating the words and the picture chosen is great. Leaving open a window a bit . . . witch or not? I like that. This is very intense and creative, dark, soulful. Great job and good luck!
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Eerie. I love it. You did a great job incorporating the words and the picture chosen is great. Leaving open a window a bit . . . witch or not? I like that. This is very intense and creative, dark, soulful. Great job and good luck!
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind words.
