Comment from Ann Marie Anglin

Excellent

I'd give this 6 stars, but alas, I've used them up! I love this poem, its rhyme and rhythm, the imagery of a beautiful woman betrayed and forlorn. So many people seek solace in "memory erasers" to flee their pain. A great job of using the words given creatively. Kind regards, Ann Marie

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018

Thank you for such a nice review! This made my day. :)

Comment from Therese103

Excellent

Well, I must say that I've seen several poems for the Use These Words contest, and this is the best one so far! Well done! Thank you for sharing:-)
Blessings, Therese

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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work. I glad you liked it!

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Oooo this is amazing..I've read three of these word prompt poems and each is different. Yours is a spine tingler...poor girl.
Each man that catches just a glimpse,
possess her with a stare....ooooo that's good
God bless

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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018

Thank you! Your review means a lot! I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem.