Comment from LynnetteOK

Excellent

This is a creative and interesting topic. I think it's something we all wonder about.
The Etheree format was followed perfectly.
Finally, the photo you chose to use is a great fit.
Overall, very well written!
Best of luck in the contest.
LynnetteOK

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018

Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi whoever you are. This seems like a good entry for the contest. I like this. It is philosophical. Let's make this entry perfect. See below. Thank you for sharing

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"After people die do they become ghost?". Ghosts as the subject people is plural

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"Whats comes next I wonder after death.". Should be What without the s.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018

Thanks for reading and for your comments, they were most helpful.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I would say..After people die do they become ghost?....ghosts
I wonder about this. JK Rowling would say the ghost is an imprint of a departed soul...who chose the feeble impersonation of life.
Well penned
God bless

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2018

Thank you for reading and for your good advice, I really appreciate it.