Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nature 5-7-5, Royal Autumn, has the right set up and personifies the seasons as the feminine summer and study fall. Summer relinquishes gracefully as the hardened autumn marches in.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thanks for the review, cheers. j

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

The feather is such a wonderful touch of majestic and royal flair to this lovely little poem. The piece works well using just the right words to give a sense of elegance and grace.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018

Thanks for your insightful review. I looked everywhere for the perfect illustration, (usually Angelheart) but could not find anything, then I saw the feather and imagined it fluttering loose from the ermine robe. So glad that you saw that too! Cheers, j

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem about royal autumn. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery with the art work and your words. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018

Thanks for your thoughtful review Teri. Autumn is coming already here in Vermont. Too fast, Sire, way too fast. Hah, cheers, j