Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very beautiful of the rainfall and harmony restored
it was an honor to read your talented work
thank you for sharing
this is well penned
I hope for the best in the contest
I like the artwork

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018

Thanks.

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

Beautiful photo...it is fitting for the nature poem. You have a well-written 5-7-5 poem and the format have been done perfectly. "Harmony restored!" Such a great last line. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018

Thanks.

Comment from mally mack

Excellent

Good Afternoon

Good entry into this contest. The syllables in your lines look perfect to me. I would suggest double checking the error in your description above the title.

Best Wishes to you

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018

Thanks.

Comment from LynnetteOK

Excellent

This is a wonderful commentary of the beauty of nature. Thirteen syllables aren't a lot when you're trying to express something so vast, but you managed it :-) This flows like a true haiku, which is great.
I also really like the picture you chose to go with it.
Well written!
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018

Thanks.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an interesting 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with excellent descriptive imagery
Darkness, wilting flower, hopefully the rain will restore
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018

Thank you for your review.

Comment from heart of Lou

Excellent

You have written a beautiful 5-7-5 poem about daffodils, first with the dark clouds rolling in, then restored by a good rainfall. Just like in life, after cloudy periods, we make up and happiness is restored.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018

Thank you so much for the wonderful review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Dark clouds, open field,
wilting daffodils, rainfall,
harmony restored....oh wilting we do when it's hot...withered and wizened...rain works?..
But I've tried it on my skin and well...still wrinkly lol
God bless...love this

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018

Thanks for the laugh and the review.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the wonder of nature. The flowers seem wilted and on the brink to die. When the rain falls it seems they get new life and bloom a while longer.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Yep and we need moe of it! There has been very little rain all over Europe and we need more of it, daffodils like lots of water, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018

Thanks for your wonderful review.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a clear picture of nature in action here, flowers may wilt but rain will bring them back. Excellent use of words and I love daffodils, so wonderful to come across a poem about them reviving.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018

Thank you for your fine review.