Wind Words
Telling whispers4 total reviews
Comment from LynnetteOK
This is a wonderful commentary of the beauty of nature. Seventeen syllables aren't a lot when you're trying to express something so vast, but you managed it :-) Using the colors of autumn for the words is creative and adds a lot to the poem.
Well written!
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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This is a wonderful commentary of the beauty of nature. Seventeen syllables aren't a lot when you're trying to express something so vast, but you managed it :-) Using the colors of autumn for the words is creative and adds a lot to the poem.
Well written!
Best of luck to you in the contest,
LynnetteOK
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thank you, your positive comments mean the world to me.
Comment from Bridget Myer
Your content was lovely and sentiment filled,
I found the choice of background and print choice was difficult to read.
I found the accompanied art work was perfect for this piece
Well done
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Your content was lovely and sentiment filled,
I found the choice of background and print choice was difficult to read.
I found the accompanied art work was perfect for this piece
Well done
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thanks for your suggestion, we went ahead and changed it and it looks much better. I appreciate the help.
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I am glad I could help. That?s what this forum platform allows. Regards B.M
Comment from fm wright
A beautifully written poem. I like the way it flowed as well as the truly colorful words you used. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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A beautifully written poem. I like the way it flowed as well as the truly colorful words you used. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Thanks for reading, I appreciate your kind review.
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You are most certainly welcome.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
In Florida, we don't experience changes of season. It's one of the things I miss about living in the north. I used to think I would never miss the snow, but each winter, I miss the first snowfall. This is a great contest entry.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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In Florida, we don't experience changes of season. It's one of the things I miss about living in the north. I used to think I would never miss the snow, but each winter, I miss the first snowfall. This is a great contest entry.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2018
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Sometimes I wish I'd never see snow again after a harsh winter, but then if it doesn't show up I'm disappointed. There's just no pleasing me! Florida looks amazing, except for the hurricanes. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it. :)
