A Place to Be Me
The magic of the ocean.15 total reviews
Comment from LaFrance
I love the ocean too. Your poem takes me back to the last time I been there. Your poem told it true how wonderful it is to be by the sea. Thanks for sharing your delightful poem.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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I love the ocean too. Your poem takes me back to the last time I been there. Your poem told it true how wonderful it is to be by the sea. Thanks for sharing your delightful poem.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to review and comment!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and yes the sea has that calming effect, I love the opening first two lines, the calling from the waves, these to me set this work for a beautiful read, vision, and some very good memories, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Excellent and yes the sea has that calming effect, I love the opening first two lines, the calling from the waves, these to me set this work for a beautiful read, vision, and some very good memories, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and write such a kind review!
Comment from Beck Fenton
You describe a wonderful day at the beach where the sea constantly calls your name and begs you to enter. The descriptions are perfect and the art you chose gives me the idea of the end of a gorgeous day at the oceans
shore.
a couple of nits... Each wave crashing ashore. It looks as if you put a shore. Might be the font.
The seagulls with their squawking become a symphony.
I really enjoyed spending the day with you.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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You describe a wonderful day at the beach where the sea constantly calls your name and begs you to enter. The descriptions are perfect and the art you chose gives me the idea of the end of a gorgeous day at the oceans
shore.
a couple of nits... Each wave crashing ashore. It looks as if you put a shore. Might be the font.
The seagulls with their squawking become a symphony.
I really enjoyed spending the day with you.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your kind review and comments!
Comment from Raul1
She loves the ocean and it is part of her life. She belongs to the sea. She loves the color of the sea. This poem is interesting. I like it. The part I liked is that she cherishes the sea much. Excellent work!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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She loves the ocean and it is part of her life. She belongs to the sea. She loves the color of the sea. This poem is interesting. I like it. The part I liked is that she cherishes the sea much. Excellent work!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from meeshu
this is well conceived and executed, lynglyng. beautiful language and practical references. all in all a joy to read and share your love of the ocean...............meeshu
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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this is well conceived and executed, lynglyng. beautiful language and practical references. all in all a joy to read and share your love of the ocean...............meeshu
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and for your kind comments.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"A Place To Be Me", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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"A Place To Be Me", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2018
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Wow, I am honored by such a wonderful review! Thank you !
Comment from Hugh McDowell
I too, love the sea. You've captured so much of a beautiful day at the shore. Everything mention has happened to me during my many beach trips. Good pace and flow. Nice sequencing of events. Excellent. Hugh
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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I too, love the sea. You've captured so much of a beautiful day at the shore. Everything mention has happened to me during my many beach trips. Good pace and flow. Nice sequencing of events. Excellent. Hugh
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review!
Comment from Kelly Hanna
This was breezy and fun. I enjoyed the relaxed feel. I had a nice time reading. The perfect length, too. I appreciated your work. Great job!....................
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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This was breezy and fun. I enjoyed the relaxed feel. I had a nice time reading. The perfect length, too. I appreciated your work. Great job!....................
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the ocean and the reason why we always love to go to the ocean for holidays. The waves rolling onto the shore is one of the most soothing motions to watch.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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A very well-written poem about the ocean and the reason why we always love to go to the ocean for holidays. The waves rolling onto the shore is one of the most soothing motions to watch.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, this poem radiates your love for the ocean and all that is associated with these beautiful waves. I personally could not live anywhere but on the East or West coast. I need to look at the waves , smell and taste the salty air, hear the seagulls and feel the sand between my toes and sun in my face. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Yes, this poem radiates your love for the ocean and all that is associated with these beautiful waves. I personally could not live anywhere but on the East or West coast. I need to look at the waves , smell and taste the salty air, hear the seagulls and feel the sand between my toes and sun in my face. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind review and comments.
