Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. Your poem indeed has the correct amount of syllables as listed in the criteria of this contest. The picture you have chosen for your illustration is also quite appropriate, even as if you may have used it for inspiration. Good luck with your contest entry!

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thank you for your great comments and review. I was looking for a way to express how bonded a pet is with the family. Regards!!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very sweet, precious and well written 5-7-5 pet poetry you have done for the writing prompt. You used very good words and the art work you chose was great! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thank you Teri!! Much appreciated

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
Yes! You have captured one of the most amazing traits that dogs often display. Our daughter's Golden Retriever is constantly pulling her back to shore when our daughter gets out too far in our lake...
A fine sentiment and well-crafted.

Best Wishes!

diane

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thank you Diane, I?m so glad it resonated with you as it did with me!! Regards!

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

A beautifully written poem about a pet and a wonderful entry for the contest. Best of wishes there and really love the picture.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thanks so much!! I am glad it resonated with you as it did with me. Best regards!!

reply by fm wright on 27-Aug-2018

You're welcome and same to you.

Comment from Donka Kristeva

Excellent

This is a great theme to write about and your 5-7-5 has given a clear, heart-felt message of gratitude, hope and loyalty. The art work is made for this poem.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thanks for your great review. I hope it conveys a message of a faithful, loving pet. Regards!

Comment from Anne B Francis

Excellent

Animals of all kinds but especially dogs have saved the lives of so many people they are truly amazing - they sense sickness, and they are forever by your side. Lovely words

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thanks so much Anne. I appreciate your review.

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

I believe your pet is a St. Bernard. Please correct me if I'm wrong. It is amazing how selfless, brave and endearing a dog can be. Don't have dogs now because I travel to much and have too much respect for them to kennel. Very nice poem and I wish you luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2018

Thanks Victor. Always grateful for your thoughts and comments!!

reply by victor 66 on 28-Aug-2018

You are most welcome.