Comment from victor 66

Excellent

Congratulations on your win. I perhaps, reading this after the contest, should be more attentive to contests prior to their closing. However, I read your poem before I realize you possessed the coveted blue ribbon. I liked your short poem very much and I know you deserved the win.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

Thank no you so much Victor

reply by victor 66 on 01-Sep-2018

Again, you are most welcome. I'm happy for your success.

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, while a sad commentary about life, its truth is unquestioned and this write is honest in its sentiment and delivery - the presentation is exact in both reference and imagery and the rendering symbolic for many of us - thank you for sharing...

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

thank you so much

reply by evesayshi on 31-Aug-2018

You are very welcome, Jen, my pleasure...Eve

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Jen. This was probably a blind contest. I don't get notified for those. I don't think I will ever win a site contest and I don't enter member sponsidered conyests. Congratulations again. Native Americans are so superior to us. They live in harmony with nature.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

Thanks. Take care. Jen x

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Congratulations with this write which must have escaped me first time around Jen, a worthy winner and none of us know what lies ahead as we approach the final journey, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

Yes, very scary huh? Thanks for reviewing. Love Jen.x

Comment from Kelly Hanna

Excellent

Great picture to go with the message. I felt a calm acceptance. Good job!.................................................................................... .

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

Thanks Kelly

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

You have five questions in only ten words while you also pose the possibility and query for the future. That's really impressive for just a ten word prompt!

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2018

Thanks a lot Shauna. Scary huh?

Comment from Bump3

Excellent

The art and colors you chose complement this piece nicely. I think many people will identify with this poem as we all wonder what "the end" will be like for each of us.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Many thanks

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I,love thempicture it supplements the,sparse verse


Waiting and wondering

how and when

and what lies ahead.
I,don't know but I keep wondering
God bless

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Many thanks

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written ten-word poem about the course of life, when we getting older we become wiser and know it is time to prepare for the end of our lives, some don't have the chance.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Thanks Sandra for your comments.

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Mystery writer: yes, when we are old and sick...we wait and wonder.
How many spend time with Jesus? We try to connect with our family
and friends. Others, care for the seniors.

I've been to several funerals of great people. May they dance
with Jesus. See you on the other side. Imagine the stories we will
hear and the people we will meet. I'll be in the garden. flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Tbanks a lot for your comments.