Final journey
Entering the unknown.36 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a good poem about reflection on the passing of each person. The mystery of what lies ahead can be daunting or hopeful. It all depends on your faith. Good entry for this contest.
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This is a good poem about reflection on the passing of each person. The mystery of what lies ahead can be daunting or hopeful. It all depends on your faith. Good entry for this contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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Many thanks for the great review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
That is such a beautiful 10-worder even without your chosen pic, Anon ... has lovely flow and evokes a certain emotion of longing...definitely difficult to do in only 10-words -- great job!
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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That is such a beautiful 10-worder even without your chosen pic, Anon ... has lovely flow and evokes a certain emotion of longing...definitely difficult to do in only 10-words -- great job!
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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Many thanks Yvette, my friend
Comment from ciliverde
This is just so wonderful. The picture speaks a thousand words, the lady is so beautiful and I just love her thoughtful gaze. Waiting and wondering, not afraid, just peacefully curious. I wish I had a six for this one, I truly do,
Carol
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This is just so wonderful. The picture speaks a thousand words, the lady is so beautiful and I just love her thoughtful gaze. Waiting and wondering, not afraid, just peacefully curious. I wish I had a six for this one, I truly do,
Carol
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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Many thanks for your great review
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this and the clear, profound, and thought provoking message that this poem conveys. We never know how or when. We also can have an idea although not totally clear about what lies ahead. I really enjoyed reading this well written poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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I like this and the clear, profound, and thought provoking message that this poem conveys. We never know how or when. We also can have an idea although not totally clear about what lies ahead. I really enjoyed reading this well written poem. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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Many thanks for your great review
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks she is now on her final journey, she does not know what lies there ahead; she is in her moments of waiting and wondering; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks she is now on her final journey, she does not know what lies there ahead; she is in her moments of waiting and wondering; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing. Your poem indeed appears to have 10 words exactly as is called for in the contest's criteria. The picture you have chosen as an illustration also seems to compliment your poem quite well. Good luck with this contest entry!
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
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Thank you for sharing. Your poem indeed appears to have 10 words exactly as is called for in the contest's criteria. The picture you have chosen as an illustration also seems to compliment your poem quite well. Good luck with this contest entry!
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2018
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Many thanks.
