Comment from Hugh McDowell

Excellent

Ah, music to my ears, eyes and stomach! My wife and I vegans for over twelve years. Love to see writings about the luscious bounty of nature. Nice pace and flow. Now, if you could have just squeezed in a watermelon somehow! Lol. Excellent. Hugh

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018

Hahaha. Thanks Hugh for a great review. Much appreciated.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for this prompt, with all line and words adhered to, telling the story of gathering for the coming seasons very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Now you've made me hungry! Loved this s lot, it looks like a hard poem to write. I usually dont attempt poems with certain word counts and sllyable. Great job for this contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thank you. I?m very grateful for your time and review.

Comment from Ann Marie Anglin

Excellent

Beautifully written and illustrated. It's that time of year again; the farmers' markets are full of wonderful goodies, and the ripe fruit of nature's bounty. This is the first year we've grown grapes, and it's fun to just go outside and pluck them off the vine. Very well structured poem, with a nice rhythm. Kind regards, Ann Marie

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thank you so much. I?m grateful for your time and review.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written and very tasty 26 word poem in 8 lines you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thank you Teri. I?m grateful for your time and review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

succulent plump luscious

dripping scented handfuls..... I loved this...fall harvest is so good
Well penned poem
God bless

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thank you. I appreciate your review and I?m grateful for your encouragement.

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

This is my favorite of all the entries for this particular contest. Some didn't make much sense. You've followed the rules and written a poem that not only flowed nicely, but actually made sense. Lovely artwork to go with it. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thank you June, for the lovely review. I?m grateful for your time.

Comment from Kelly Grim

Excellent

Terrific entry into this 26 word poetry contest. What a simple subject, but what rich and colorful language used to describe it. This made my mouth water! lol But seriously, "succulent plump luscious dripping scented handfuls" - love it! Perfect pic choice too. Good luck!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thanks so much for the lovely review. I am grateful for your time and comments.

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

This is an excellent poem where the poet met not only the stringent requirements of the contest, but described a bountiful and colorful harvest with alliteration and sibilance. Succulent, plump, luscious, dripping and scented were the words that brought this poem over the top. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thank you Henry. I am grateful for your comments and nice review. Regards!

reply by Henry King on 03-Sep-2018

You are welcome.

Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

Bravo!, Your poem brings out the Lucius flavor in each of the autumn harvest fruits, I love this form of poetry. Well done! Good luck in the contest... it should do well.
Judy

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018

Thank you, Judy. I am grateful for your comments and review.