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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 6x6 poems about the mishchief kittens often find themselves in without much effort, they just seem to get tangled up in the knitting and wool laying on the table.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Sandra
Comment from Ulla
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Hahahaha, Bill, you did warn me. What are you like! Poor little Nathan must have got the shock of his like. Ouch. Curious little critters they are. I loved the picture. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Ulla, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Bill, I had to read this more than once to fully appreciate the play on words and the humor behind the knitty witty : -)
An enjoyable and lighthearted read of a story sprinkled with alliteration about a cat-astrophe of balls. Thanks for the chuckle. ~DD

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
    Thanks, DD
Comment from nomi338
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Nathan just might need those in a few months from now. When he observes his brothers getting busy with the comely female felines in the hood, and he finds that he cannot partake of the female offerings because of his old war wounds, he may well curse the day.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
    He has not stopped cursing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, you are a laugh Bill, you have a wonderful way with these 'double' meaning words and your poem here is sweet, cute and very cleverly written, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
    Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from Pamusart
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This is wonderful Bill. I really enjoyed reading it and seeing that cute photo. I look forward to the kittens series. It is a tongue twister too. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Pam
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Good job, Bill, with your kitten poem. I like the way you used the word 'sew.' Good use of 'k' and 'n' alliteration throughout. I really don't think a warning needed to be on this, but I guess it's better to be safe than sorry. Your picture I a great choice. Thanks for haring. Jan

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
    Thank you, Jan
Comment from judiverse
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This wasn't as bad as I expected. The vet gets involved and gets Nathan all knitted up, so it sounds like no permanent harm was done. Lock up those knitting needles if you have kittens around, ladies. Nice use of alliteration in this. Cute names for the kittens. judi

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Judi. I?ll try not to hurt them.
reply by judiverse on 03-Sep-2018
    You're very welcome. Seize the day! judi
Comment from damommy
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Oh, my goodness. That why kittens should never play with yard. Besides getting stabbed with the needles, they often get choked in the yarn. Hope Nathan's on the mend. lol

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
    Thanks, da. No kittens were harmed in the making of this poem.
Comment from Teri7
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Poor little Nathan and Nate, the kittens. You used very cute imagery of the kittens and very interesting words to let us know what was going on. I do enjoy looking at pictures of kittens! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Teri