Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is another very cute short poem (5-7-5) about two little kittens and the cute little dog too. You used very cute and sweet words with adorable picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessing, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Wow! A 5-7-5 with the added bonus of alliteration -- great job! :) ;) Almost a new poetry form in itself...the Schott 5-7-5...kinda has a ring to it. :) ;)

Thanx for sharing this next installment in the Kitten World. :) Yvette

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018

That seems like a perfect name somehow.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Those kittens are safe because their mom trained Fido when he was a pup how to behave properly around felines. Fido would rather take on a bear than fight a cat, that is how severely he was disciplined by the kittens mom when he as a mere puppy

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018

Dogs are quick learners with cats

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Bill. I once got a tiny kitten and gave her to my brother in law. He had a German shepherd named Shana. That dog loved that kitten and would pretend to breastfeed her. She would get up on the dog's back and need. The dog would wince but never raised a paw. That cat was killed by a dog. I think she trusted the wrong dog. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018

Thanks for sharing the story.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

The dog seems to be handling the kitten nation with great aplomb. What a nice pup.

Fun abounds and so do the kitty cats in this terrific little poem.

Thanks for the share, Bill.

Gloria

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018

Thanks, Gloria

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's the best if the kittens grow up with a big dog. Sometimes they become the best of friends like our neighbor's cat who bonded with their St. Bernard. Cute one.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is great..I actually know who the Katzenjammer kids are, that probably reveals my age lol. :) You create the best series, I really enjoy them. So does my 3 cats! Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018

Thanks, BN

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, yes that dog could snap at any moment if these kittens become a nuisance! I liked the word: 'Katzenjammer". He he he, genius, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018

Thank you, Dolly

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I'm sometimes attracted to those sites that have cute animal stories. Those little feline fuzz balls have been known to win over big dogs. I hope that's true in this case. Excellent use of alliteration. Love that picture. Katzenjammer kids is a great description. judi

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018

Thank you, Judi

Comment from Hugh McDowell

Excellent

Bill, this is very cute. Tells a complete story in seventeen syllables. Read well silently and out loud. When I read out loud, loved saying the first line. There are probably enough old timers on here to remember the Katzenjammer kids. Love the picture. Hugh

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 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018

I?ve already had to explain them to a couple thirty-somethings so I don?t know.