Comment from A Fractal Heart

Good

Thank you for sharing this love poem. Love is one of the best things to write about, and endless source of inspiration. Your words highlight how we are all interdependent, we are defined not only by ourselves but also through others.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018

Thanks for the read. Wonder why only a good?. Would appreciate you ideas on what could be improved?

Comment from fm wright

Excellent

A truly beautiful entry for the Love Poem contest. It so eloquently expresses love in a limited number of words. It flows wonderfully as well. Blessings for the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018

Thank you so much for the read and the comments.

Comment from Hugh McDowell

Excellent

The poem points out a crucial ingredient in relationships, it's never about one person. Whoever we get involved with change us as we change them. Love the permission aspect of the theme. Hugh

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018

Thank you for the read and the review.