Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is a well written cinquain that tells of the miracle of love and its gift a child.
Congratulations on placing second in the contest. Interesting and apt artwork.

Keep writing

dragopoet

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

Thank you so much

reply by dragonpoet on 23-Sep-2018

You are so very welcome.

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Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

The artwork you selected is quite eye catching and reinforces your words well. I admired your substantive title and focus on the "magic". I am glad your cinquain was well received in the contest. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

Thanks so much.

Comment from Bucketlist

Exceptional

This is a very enjoyable poem. I liked the image and the romantic tone of your penning. I think it's a good entry for the contest, and I wish you luck
Hugs, Trisha

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018

Thanks for the encouragement.

reply by Bucketlist on 13-Sep-2018

You ate welcome keep writing!

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Love is a good Union and if one really love each other they can work through all the ups and downs the world throws their way. Love is a very strong Union.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2018

Thanks.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This poem could be taken one of two ways; a new romance or a couple made a baby which would cover the new life. I'm not a huge fan of free verse poetry but I did enjoy this one and trying to put myself in your place as to what the poem means.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2018

How ever you perceive it is correct. I tried to create the poem with two meanings. Thanks for your review.