The Kooky Undertones
Meet the next internet phenomenon!7 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
HA! I loved the sense of humor and your descriptions. I can't believe you did it without the use of the letter "A"...that's "amazing!" I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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HA! I loved the sense of humor and your descriptions. I can't believe you did it without the use of the letter "A"...that's "amazing!" I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Cindy - so glad you enjoyed! :) ;)
Comment from Earl Corp
I have to give you some big kudos for taking on this prompt of without an A. You actually made it look easy and I enjoyed reading it As a testament to how hard it is I tried to do it in this review and I couldn't make it through two words.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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I have to give you some big kudos for taking on this prompt of without an A. You actually made it look easy and I enjoyed reading it As a testament to how hard it is I tried to do it in this review and I couldn't make it through two words.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Thanx, Earl -- it was a little something to not grade papers/lesson planning for a bit so, as a challenging distraction for the brain, it worked! :) :) Appreciate you stopping by the read and review -- always a pleasure, sir -- have a great evening! :) ;)
Comment from kleck140
Wow1 Just what I needed today to perk me up for writing.
You put into words, so elegantly, the report of the well
tuned foursome. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Wow1 Just what I needed today to perk me up for writing.
You put into words, so elegantly, the report of the well
tuned foursome. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Thanx, kleck, wouldn't say they're exactly 'elegant', but it was a little something to not grade papers/lesson planning for a bit so, as a distraction, it worked! :) :) Appreciate you stopping by the read and review -- have a great evening! :) ;)
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You are most welcome!
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You are most welcome!
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You are welcome!
Comment from jenintorre
I love your story about the Kookie Undertones, although it sounded like a poem to me with very good rhyme. Love the photo. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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I love your story about the Kookie Undertones, although it sounded like a poem to me with very good rhyme. Love the photo. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Thanx, Jen -- and it was a poem...the contest was for a story or a poem. :) :) Anyway, it was a little something to not grade papers/lesson planning for a bit so, as a distraction, it worked! :) :) Appreciate your stopping by the read and review -- have a great evening! :) ;)
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a zany, cooky and adorable. I would mention that there is an 'a' in the last stanza. ...spend a bloody fortune... it seems to be easily fixable. Good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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This is a zany, cooky and adorable. I would mention that there is an 'a' in the last stanza. ...spend a bloody fortune... it seems to be easily fixable. Good luck.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2018
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Thanx, Sugarray!! :) ;) That's what I get for second guessing myself on that final read-over before posting -- no more last second changes!! Thanx so much and have a wonderful evening!! :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and presentation.
-You did not use the unmentionable letter!
-The poem is quirky, and this group is, too.
-Good description, especially of their
concert, which is "pre-recorded."
-I don't think I will spend a fortune
to join them on Twitter, but I
hope you do well in the contest,
which would be better!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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-Good image and presentation.
-You did not use the unmentionable letter!
-The poem is quirky, and this group is, too.
-Good description, especially of their
concert, which is "pre-recorded."
-I don't think I will spend a fortune
to join them on Twitter, but I
hope you do well in the contest,
which would be better!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Thanx, Pam -- it was a little something to not do work for a bit so, as a distraction, it worked! :) :) Appreciate your stopping by the read and review -- have a great evening! :) ;)
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You are very welcome. Glad it was a good distraction--you have a good evening, too!
Comment from tfawcus
Congratulations on achieving five verses without a single 'a', whilst still maintaining a cohesive story-line. Your poem tells of a growing phenomenon, recording artists who can make a name fr themselves without leaving their bedroom! It looks as if this young man is pretty clever with the Photoshop cloning tool as well!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Congratulations on achieving five verses without a single 'a', whilst still maintaining a cohesive story-line. Your poem tells of a growing phenomenon, recording artists who can make a name fr themselves without leaving their bedroom! It looks as if this young man is pretty clever with the Photoshop cloning tool as well!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2018
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Thanx, Tony -- it was a little something to not grade papers/lesson planning for a bit so, as a distraction, it worked! :) :) Appreciate your stopping by the read and review -- have a great evening! :) ;)
