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Twisting Storm

Septolet Poetry

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Comment from Joan E.
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Your fourteen words are certainly descriptive of a "twisting storm" and reinforce all the news stories about Hurricane Florence. Your artwork selection parallels your Septolet perfectly. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2018

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Good job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. Your poem has the correct number of words and does tell a good, but frightening, story. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2018

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Septolet about the twister and the whirling wind that seems to destroy everything in its path. The Septolet's format seems to remind of the format of a twister.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2018

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Comment from meeshu
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really well written in a powerful form, the two word verse lines add suspense to a tense message. great visual with the picture..

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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Comment from Karol Bond
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Well done. The photo is amazing. Such raw force, I was in Missouri, visiting in-laws when Joplin, Missouri got sufficiently wiped off the map. I love living in Oregon!
Good luck in the contest. ;)

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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Comment from Lady Jane
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Excellent septolet here, writer. YOu've captured the essence of the 'beast.' The formatting, the picture, the description all cohesively form an amazing septolet. Seen a lot of these round the site last few days. All so well done. Yours is a strong contender. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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An interesting employment of this format...a beautiful pairing of visual imagery to construct a complete tornadic storm even without your chosen pic. ;) ;)

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent short poem for the contest
with excellent imagery of the motion of the storm
Good use of alliteration in the description
Well done
Best wishes in the voting
RS

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good image and presentation.
-You have used 14 very vivid words
to describe a storm.
-Having them in pairs is effective.
-You also include key elements of
a storm, like the wind.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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    You are welcome.
Comment from Anne B Francis
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This poem speaks so much about what is going on at present, so frightening millions having to leave their homes - the picture is a clear sign of how strong these hurricans can be - your words say it all

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2018

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    Thank you Anne for the great review.