Black Diamond
for the contest snorkling3 total reviews
Comment from Possummagic
This is an amazing story and I was riveted from beginning to end. Please tell me this is going to be part of a book. I'd love to read some more of this imaginative story. I hope you win the contest. PM
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
This is an amazing story and I was riveted from beginning to end. Please tell me this is going to be part of a book. I'd love to read some more of this imaginative story. I hope you win the contest. PM
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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No, sorry...It's only a short story for the contest...but thanks for your kind words...
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You?re welcome.PM
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I just entered, vampire love... forever, in the swamp contest if you'd like to read it...
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Thank you.PM
Comment from WildWithWords
A well put together story featuring enough of interest and intrigue to keep my attention throughout. Nicely edited too. I found nothing to correct.
Nicely written overall.
Bill (WildWithWords)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
A well put together story featuring enough of interest and intrigue to keep my attention throughout. Nicely edited too. I found nothing to correct.
Nicely written overall.
Bill (WildWithWords)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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thank you...
Comment from KatyM
I liked the story and the surprising ending. There was one little spelling issue: where it says "He wipped his hands clean of blood with his apron." It should be spelled wiped instead.
Otherwise, it was a great story.
Katy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
I liked the story and the surprising ending. There was one little spelling issue: where it says "He wipped his hands clean of blood with his apron." It should be spelled wiped instead.
Otherwise, it was a great story.
Katy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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thank you... I missed that...