Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your 5-7-5 love poem with rhyme. I liked the idea of describing falling in love as two combined hearts creating "just one sound". Cheers and best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you very much, much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

What a lovely entry for this contest. So true also. It seems like our soulmate can finish our thoughts, and sentences. A beautiful thing. Wonderful.
Blessings...

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Aries Poet

Excellent

Such a simple poem, but encapsulates what true love really is, two hearts becoming one and beating just one sound. My parents have been married for 66 years and their hearts beat as one and their energies are interwoven within their souls. Great poem!

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you very much and my parents were the same until one departed, this review is very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

This is truly poetic and beautiful. A simple compelling thought with your perfect twist... "beating just one sound" thanks for this lovey, relaxing read. Yours, diana

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed this one****kahpot

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Oh love is a many splend thing falling in love never hurt anybody. Their two hearts sing the song of love. The put their hopes and dreams into this thing called love.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you my Freind, should become a film, " this thing called love" a great review, many thanks****kahpot

reply by country ranch writer on 20-Sep-2018

smiles

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Very well done, Kahpot. It is clever but more than that it is very true as i remember it. LOL Good luck to you in the contest, my friend. Looks and sounds like a winner to me. Bob

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you very much and yes as I remember it was (is) true****kahpot

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

What a top little poem. Every Spring ( I forget where you are it is Spring in Australia, now...) I always said to God "Will this be my Spring?" And wouldn't you know it I met Louise just prior to Spring in 1985.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you my Freind, and yes spring is a great season, gives people (bounce)****kahpot

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

So very true, kahpot.
What a perfect little three line poem you've managed to come up with.
Not only is the message it conveys a sound one, you have also managed to write it in rhyme, and quite well too, if I may say so.
Excellent--best wishes to you in the contest!
~Dean :-))

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you, someone once said " if it could rhyme it would be better" many thanks ****kahpot

Comment from Cheryl1957

Excellent

Very pretty poem. Love the romantic nature of this poem about true love. I love how you describe the two hearts beating "just one sound". Very nice.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Good job, kahpot, with your 3 line contest entry. I like the rhyme. Your message is loud and clear, too. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thank you, it comes from trying to submit to your club and understanding the forms and meaning (placement) of words****kahpot