Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

We are on the same wavelength--my current post is about dogs too. I enjoyed your addition of mono-verse rhyme and alliteration to your 5-7-5. The picture you selected is quite parallel as well. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018

Thanks, Joan

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute poem about Poodle world. You used very cute words and very appropriate imagery from the cute art work. Check out the second line as I just counted six syllables and you need seven. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018

Thanks, Teri. I forgot the T in 'sculpted'. All better.

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

I love reading poetry aloud. And it is the most fun when a good writer knows how to toss around the alliteration in the best way possible and you've done that here. The imagery is amusing. The picture you chose is very appropriate. In three lines you've created a little animated cartoon with the music cranked. Very cute. Well expressed.

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018

Thank you, Liz, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. I wonder where in the world you find these pictures! I think the picture came first and then the poem, right? Fun rhyming 5-7-5 and yay for jacked up poodles? Enough to give me a panic attack.

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018

The pictures with poodles are plentiful and diverse.