Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A tranquil and white shiny write filled with the icy chill of death, an atmospheric write that sent a shiver down my spine, the scene we will be experiencing soon, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thank you so much, Dolly :))
Carol

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Very pensive and interesting near-tanka. Rich imagery, tone and tenor. I enjoyed this. Fine work. Lovely photo, too! I miss Winter (and Fall) here in the tropics.

Love,
rd

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thank you so much, I miss winter and fall too - very much!
love,
Carol

reply by rama devi on 29-Sep-2018

:-))) xxoo