In a Winter Sky
Star Gazing8 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I love everything about this poem. Your word choices make it for me. "Romp" and "cascading" are excellent words, but my favorite by far is "restless." There is so much energy in this photo of the sky. You captured it well. Hope this poem does well. It should.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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I love everything about this poem. Your word choices make it for me. "Romp" and "cascading" are excellent words, but my favorite by far is "restless." There is so much energy in this photo of the sky. You captured it well. Hope this poem does well. It should.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
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Thank you, Debbie!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the winter night sky with shooting stars and the tails light up the sky. A beautiful show to look at on a cold winter's night while snug up cozily in front of the warm chimney.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the winter night sky with shooting stars and the tails light up the sky. A beautiful show to look at on a cold winter's night while snug up cozily in front of the warm chimney.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you Sandra!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely and well written 5-7-5 about the stars and the sky for the prompt entry. You used very good words about the shooting stars and the comets. You used very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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This is a very lovely and well written 5-7-5 about the stars and the sky for the prompt entry. You used very good words about the shooting stars and the comets. You used very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An intriguing poem that speaks of comets and shooting stars actually 'playing together' in the night skies...a fun imagination! :) :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the competition! :)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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An intriguing poem that speaks of comets and shooting stars actually 'playing together' in the night skies...a fun imagination! :) :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the competition! :)
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from Kelly Grim
Beautiful! Another amazing contest entry, and another reason I decided I wouldn't stand a chance if I entered. The image of stars romping with comets in a restless sky is terrific! Very well done!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Beautiful! Another amazing contest entry, and another reason I decided I wouldn't stand a chance if I entered. The image of stars romping with comets in a restless sky is terrific! Very well done!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved this write because it made me think that there is a whole world out there in the skies that we are not privy too! All those shooting stars and comets that we are missing, but not so here, you are reminding us of the restless sky, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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I loved this write because it made me think that there is a whole world out there in the skies that we are not privy too! All those shooting stars and comets that we are missing, but not so here, you are reminding us of the restless sky, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you. What a lovely review, Dolly!
Comment from RodG
I like the concept you are describing here, but though I have seen meteor showers, I have never seen "cascading comets." Still, the alliteration is nice.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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I like the concept you are describing here, but though I have seen meteor showers, I have never seen "cascading comets." Still, the alliteration is nice.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thanks Rod. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Kelly Hanna
This poem is very visual for me. I felt the chill in the air as I looked at the picture. It was nice and relaxing to think about. The photo that you chose is really nice. Good job on this piece.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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This poem is very visual for me. I felt the chill in the air as I looked at the picture. It was nice and relaxing to think about. The photo that you chose is really nice. Good job on this piece.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018
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Thank you Kelly!
