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Dear Little Child

Children's Poem About God

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Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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What a very sweet and wonderful children's poem. I thought it fit the message and the requirements of the contest very well. I believe children would really learn from the words and understand the message. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018
    Dear Cindy, Thank you for your comments and rating, and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Dear Little Child, is a primer for teaching children about God when it does the most good.

Proverbs 22:6
Train up a child in the way he should go,
And when he is old he will not depart from it.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2018
    Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and rating and Biblical verse. Dove
Comment from persevere
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Charming poem with good rhymes. It illustrates the command of Jesus, " Suffer little children to come unto me" The accompanying illustration also tells a story.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
    Dear persevere, Thank you for your rating and comments. Dove
Comment from kiwijenny
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Dear little child,
Jesus is like you, meek and mild ...this is profound and struck me in an epiphany type way
Well penned this poem that reminds us of child like love form a savior above...
God bless I needed this today

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
    Dear kiwijenny, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful children's poem about God. I love how you talked about Jesus being meek and mild like the little child. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
    Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and rating, and blessings to you too. Donna
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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I love this. A "letter" to a child about the love of Jesus for him/her plants living seed that will grow in faith and by God's grace. A wonderful and thoughtful way to talk to a child about God's love.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
    Dear Donka Kristeva, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dovemarie
reply by Donka Kristeva on 30-Sep-2018
    My pleasure, Dovemarie.
Comment from Sugarray77
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This is a great poem and so appropriate for small children. It teaches them faith, perseverance and trust. I also loved the personal affirmation it teaches each child about self worth. Well done!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
    Dear Sugarray, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove