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Guardian Angels

Lullaby for baby

6 total reviews 
Comment from l.d.lauritzen
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Like rhyming poetry. Spiritual things seem lost on many people today. I wasn't very good at instilling it in my own children. Wish I'd done better. I think there are two words whose removal would make the poem flow better-just, and do. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
    Thanks so much! I am grateful for your comments.
reply by l.d.lauritzen on 01-Oct-2018
Comment from jenintorre
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This is a lovely poem or should I say lullaby. I find that lullabies sung to children really do work in sending them to sleep. I have sung them to all my children and grandchildren. A beautiful piece of writing. Takd care. Jen.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
    Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written lullaby for a little child that they will remember until their older years and sing it to their children too. A child may not understand the words at that stage but the voice of the singer is soothing and they will always hear those sweet melody in their ears.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
    Thank you Sandra. I value your comments and review. Best wishes.
Comment from Sally Law
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This is so precious and sweet! Love this! The picture is just how I would imagine God's angels watch over our children with adoring attention. Possibly never leaving their post even as we age? I hope you win the contest. You got my vote!
May God watch over and keep you in His care,
Sally

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2018
    Thank you very much! I am glad you sent me your comments. I love knowing we have guardian angels too.
reply by Sally Law on 01-Oct-2018
    You?re welcome!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is a sweet and very beautiful poem about guardian angels. They are there, and I like the sweet message of this. I like the way that it rhymes and flows along with the excellent accompanying artwork. I enjoyed this well written poem. Well done!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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Beautiful! All children would like to have such lullaby sang to them and to know that angels are always at their side. A poem about God's protection, peace and love for His little ones.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2018
    Thanks so much for the great review!