Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

I voted for your poem-congratulation for the win ..
I thought both poem and picture completemted each other.

The picture you chose is stunning and the light blue writing looks so good .

PS.You need to check the picture on the firefly poem ....it's missing ...that advanced option is horrible ..I have lost many hours struggling with it.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018

Thank you for letting me know about the photo and for your vote on my other poem. I really do appreciate it. :)

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Love the entire 'chill' you've created with you precise word choice and combinations. I would suggest, perhaps, changing the last line for correct grammar's sake maybe 'passes too quickly ' to keep your syllable count correct...? ;) A truly wonderful entry for this contest, anonymous! Thank you for sharing and good luck! ;)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018

Thank you for your great suggestion, I've already changed it. I really appreciate your reading and reviewing. :)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Ode to Winter 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely art work. It all goes together very well. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018

Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate you reading my poem.