My life changed suddenly
I was devastated9 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Many thanks for sharing your response to this unusual prompt. Your tribute to your friend is compelling in each poem. I admired your use of rhyme and the contrast in your 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Many thanks for sharing your response to this unusual prompt. Your tribute to your friend is compelling in each poem. I admired your use of rhyme and the contrast in your 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Many thanks for your wonderful review.
Comment from country ranch writer
Such a shame she had to pass BUT SHE WOULDN'T WANT HER BEST FRIEND TO QUIT DANCING SHE WOULD WANT HER TO CONTINUE ON FOR BOTH THEIR SAKES.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Such a shame she had to pass BUT SHE WOULDN'T WANT HER BEST FRIEND TO QUIT DANCING SHE WOULD WANT HER TO CONTINUE ON FOR BOTH THEIR SAKES.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Thanks for your kind words
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This sequel poetry rightly and symphonically links to the prime theme of the earlier events composed in the previous poetry following happening a sudden event; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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This sequel poetry rightly and symphonically links to the prime theme of the earlier events composed in the previous poetry following happening a sudden event; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Many thanks for your review and best wishes
Comment from meeshu
the story is still a sad one but I can sense a bit of healing has taken place between the two writings. we never get over it but we must get used to it..
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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the story is still a sad one but I can sense a bit of healing has taken place between the two writings. we never get over it but we must get used to it..
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Many thanks for your review and good wishesmant thanks, much appreciated
Comment from Rickie1
bold and old, dancer and cancer nice rhyme and contrasting words. I don't see this very much. Well done. Sorry for your loss. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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bold and old, dancer and cancer nice rhyme and contrasting words. I don't see this very much. Well done. Sorry for your loss. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Many thanks for your review and good wishes
Comment from kiwijenny
Oh cancer is the worst...
Would she want you to quit though...was my take away
God bless...and thank you for the poem...like the song I say...just dance
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Oh cancer is the worst...
Would she want you to quit though...was my take away
God bless...and thank you for the poem...like the song I say...just dance
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Thanks for your lovely review
Comment from Michele Harber
First, my condolences on the loss of your friend. Your original poem was direct and sad and lovely, and this was a worthy follow-up. The death of a contemporary makes us conscious of our own mortality so, yes, I can fully see how that can turn you old. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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First, my condolences on the loss of your friend. Your original poem was direct and sad and lovely, and this was a worthy follow-up. The death of a contemporary makes us conscious of our own mortality so, yes, I can fully see how that can turn you old. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Many thanks for your comments,
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sequal poem. We feel young and bold and want to conquer the world, but life is not always fair and we are sometimes get disappointed and feel we don't want to carry on.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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A very well-written sequal poem. We feel young and bold and want to conquer the world, but life is not always fair and we are sometimes get disappointed and feel we don't want to carry on.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Many thanks Sandra
Comment from Kay Seed
Wow, even without reading the original poem the first poem is a very strong, stand-alone piece. It's true that after something like that happens you grow up and lose your child-like innocence. I'm so sorry this happened to your friend.
Good luck in the contest.
-Kay
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Wow, even without reading the original poem the first poem is a very strong, stand-alone piece. It's true that after something like that happens you grow up and lose your child-like innocence. I'm so sorry this happened to your friend.
Good luck in the contest.
-Kay
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much Kay for your great comments and kind words.
