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Be Wee With Bea

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An allegory in the Winnie the Pooh genre

13 total reviews 
Comment from SueZen
Exceptional
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AWEsome new chapter on the life of Bea. What a mindful, sweet and evolved wee bear he is and how well he manages to face the challenges and solve the problems he is confronted with. And how much we all can LEARN from him is a true GIFT, so take on board straight away, be re-minded of the fact that we too have Bea-qualities and power to discover and develop. The MAKER of Bea made sure of that!
And the wonderful exercises of Bea can benefit our progress too. And ultimately lead to living happily ever after TOGETHER, what BLISS!

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
    Thank you again for your wonderful review and the 6 stars. You really are grasping the meaning and spirituality intended in theses chapters.
reply by SueZen on 14-Oct-2018
    No coincidence that sweet wee bear Bea came my way, for his company and wisdom support me on my journey as human being and, like Bea, bravely bear the the challenges life brings me and still keep my biorhythms in balance.
Comment from Beck Fenton
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We finally get to meet Sweet Puppy! Poor little thing and how wonderful for Bea to get another companion!
My only question is whether WHINING should be all capitals. It feels to be to not need to be capitalized, but I'm interested in hearing what you have to say.
Good job as always!

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
    As always, thank you for your supportive review. To reflect on the purpose for capitalization I wanted to share what a paid reviewer said (one of the kindest) or least brutal. lol So I emailed it to you. Thank you.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Liz. A cool chapter and definitely made me think. It's my first chapter in your book so wasn't quite sure it worked but, by the end, I enjoyed the read. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
    Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Bea invites you to peruse some of her recent journeys, no review necessary, just joy.