Nightingale's Plea
3-5-3 on Nightingale3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao unknown poet.
I gave you your second vote and I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you win.
Your poem definitely stood out from the rest...you presented a very touching scenario.
The pic reminded me of Cio Cio San (Madame Butterfly)..When she sings "Un Bel Di' " : she imagines (after three long years)her beloved Pinkerton's return ..she sees him walking towards their house calling out her (secret) name ( Fragance of Verbena) but she hides to tease him a bit before revealing herself.
Pinkerton calling Cio Cio San is the nigthingale singing /calling for his (new) companion .
I don't know if this was your meaning but that's what reading you poem meant to me. Very romantic, touching poem.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
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Ciao unknown poet.
I gave you your second vote and I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you win.
Your poem definitely stood out from the rest...you presented a very touching scenario.
The pic reminded me of Cio Cio San (Madame Butterfly)..When she sings "Un Bel Di' " : she imagines (after three long years)her beloved Pinkerton's return ..she sees him walking towards their house calling out her (secret) name ( Fragance of Verbena) but she hides to tease him a bit before revealing herself.
Pinkerton calling Cio Cio San is the nigthingale singing /calling for his (new) companion .
I don't know if this was your meaning but that's what reading you poem meant to me. Very romantic, touching poem.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
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This was exactly where I was going with this short poem on the nightingale! I didn't want to write about the Nightingale and the Emperor - which was what everyone else seemed to be highlighting in their poems. So, Madame Butterfly it was - for me. Thank you for taking the time to share your insightful thoughts. And - for the generous rating!
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Sweet and romantic. The song of the nightingale a song for lovers. This short poem permeates with the beauty of the night and the breath of love
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Sweet and romantic. The song of the nightingale a song for lovers. This short poem permeates with the beauty of the night and the breath of love
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
She waits for another love notes? From the nightingale's beautiful song, in the moonlit garden, what is floating romantic love song; very subtle in expression; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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She waits for another love notes? From the nightingale's beautiful song, in the moonlit garden, what is floating romantic love song; very subtle in expression; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights.
