Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Was a cute and interesting read right up until I got to your author notes....then I had to laugh out loud! :) ;) I actually loved the commentary...although, the write was quite entertaining! :) :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thanks, Yvette

Comment from phil nelson

Excellent

Excellent bit of fun -a treat to read and I like your poetic license on a number of new words--you have a very clever imagination and I look forward to reading more of your work

All the Best
phil

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thanks, Phil

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Thank God, mombies and dadabies do not try, now let wallaby family has to win the race for there is no other hurdles on their way; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thanks, ALD