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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from brenda faye curtis
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This is a good one! You should, however, be careful. If Marvel gets ahold of your idea, they'll be after you for a superhero movie script!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    He?d be the villain as he carries leprosy.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 31-Oct-2018
    Oh, well, I guess they can't all be heroes. :)
Comment from nomi338
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Yes the nation's highways and byways can be a dangerous place to cross for those who lack wings to fly across. Since no one is building a land bridge to aid in crossing over or installing a traffic light. Oh well, roadkill for everyone, eat up.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Armadillos carry leprosy, so ?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, I hope I never meet him! He may crush my truck on the road! A fun write Bill and I have no idea how you think up these ideas to entertain us all, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Gloria ....
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Ha, I'm really getting a charge out of your armadillos, big bug buffet isn't exactly my cup of tea for a meal but for some of the critters, it's just the thing.

A beautifully original and entertaining read. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Nanny 6
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Oh geez... One can only appreciate this if they are from the south where they see dead road kill all over the place... including armadillo LOL I got a chuckle out of this one Bill!
Judy

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Judy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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That is truly an entertaining and well-written piece, Bill - it truly puts a smile on your face throughout while your last stanza actually makes the reader smile!! :) :) Great job and thanx for sharing! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Yvette
Comment from frogbook
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Is this a real hero-I have never heard of him but he certainly looks the part. I would think a car hitting him would be the flattened thing! Ha. This one was quite well written and funny.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thanks, FB
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Well done rhyming quatrains. If only there were such an Armadillo Man to help those cute little critters cross the road and then back again. For what purpose, I'll never know.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from Earl Corp
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This poem is hilarious, If I had a six star rating left you would have earned it with this poem. I LOVE the graphic you chose to accompany the poem. Excellent job my friend!

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Earl
Comment from damommy
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He's certainly a scary super-hero. I agree that he could give Big Foot a run for his money. But bless him for helping the armadillos. Cute and jaunty poem, and a delight to read.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
    Thanks, da