Behind The Door
In loving memory of Matthew Glenn Shaw 1982-200817 total reviews
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This is a very nice poem. It gives images of what once was, and the life of a young man gone too soon. So sad to hear, but the memories you have will make him live in.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This is a very nice poem. It gives images of what once was, and the life of a young man gone too soon. So sad to hear, but the memories you have will make him live in.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for this thoughtful review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a sad poem of loss and grief and I felt your sorrow in these words as you still keep this person's belongings to remind you of his life. A skilful post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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This is such a sad poem of loss and grief and I felt your sorrow in these words as you still keep this person's belongings to remind you of his life. A skilful post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you, l always appreciate your great reviews. :)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats on your contest win! This is so sad, not least because he was only 26 and a lovely looking young man. I'm not sure what relation he was to you but the obvious heartache you still feel is poignantly conveyed in your fine verse. There's something about a person's possessions after they've passed that is so difficult to come to terms with. On the one hand, we want to be reminded, on the other, it's often too painful and final. You've beautifully and sensitively captured this ambivalence here (Sharon?) and I applaud you for this wonderful tribute. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Congrats on your contest win! This is so sad, not least because he was only 26 and a lovely looking young man. I'm not sure what relation he was to you but the obvious heartache you still feel is poignantly conveyed in your fine verse. There's something about a person's possessions after they've passed that is so difficult to come to terms with. On the one hand, we want to be reminded, on the other, it's often too painful and final. You've beautifully and sensitively captured this ambivalence here (Sharon?) and I applaud you for this wonderful tribute. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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He was a family friend. He died in a car accident, and his parents donated his organs. Matt was a very gifted musician. Thank you for reading.
Comment from shelley kaye
sorry for your loss - yea, the hurt never goes away... just lessens slightly...
this was a nice remembrance poem
i do have a suggestion about using "behind the door" as a refrain maybe beginning every stanza? eh just a thought lol...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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sorry for your loss - yea, the hurt never goes away... just lessens slightly...
this was a nice remembrance poem
i do have a suggestion about using "behind the door" as a refrain maybe beginning every stanza? eh just a thought lol...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you for reading, l appreciate it.
Comment from eliz100
I enjoyed reading this poem. By your words you were able to describe the life of someone and how the loss affected those who knew him. You included the door imagery a rewuired.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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I enjoyed reading this poem. By your words you were able to describe the life of someone and how the loss affected those who knew him. You included the door imagery a rewuired.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading. It's been some years but you never forget. I really appreciate your kind words and the 6 stars.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is an excellent interpretation of the writing prompt. The picture is charming and draws us into the sad details of the piece, causing us to empathize with the grieving loved one.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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This poem is an excellent interpretation of the writing prompt. The picture is charming and draws us into the sad details of the piece, causing us to empathize with the grieving loved one.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.. I appreciate it.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is such a lovely poem and tribute to a lost loved one that to us implies a Father. Please excuse us if we're wrong. The sentiments are so eloquently expressed and allows the reader to feel the author's emotions. Congratulations on your first place victory. Have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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This is such a lovely poem and tribute to a lost loved one that to us implies a Father. Please excuse us if we're wrong. The sentiments are so eloquently expressed and allows the reader to feel the author's emotions. Congratulations on your first place victory. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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A friend..my oldest daughter's boyfriend who died in a car crash. When he died many of his things came to our house where my daughter was still living.. thank you for reading.
Comment from MissMerri
I thought this was an excellent response to this writing prompt! You have managed to write something that will undoubtedly touch hearts and be found relatable by many. You did an exceptional job of capturing the essence of a person, showing his stored things that spoke so eloquently of the life he once lived, and how missed he now is. I liked this very much, even though it was sad. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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I thought this was an excellent response to this writing prompt! You have managed to write something that will undoubtedly touch hearts and be found relatable by many. You did an exceptional job of capturing the essence of a person, showing his stored things that spoke so eloquently of the life he once lived, and how missed he now is. I liked this very much, even though it was sad. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you for this nice review, I really appreciate your kind words. :)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a hauntingly beautiful poem. I am so sorry for the loss of Matthew. His life was filled with so much value (those are his items and his love you've kept). Grief is one confusing and difficult journey.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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What a hauntingly beautiful poem. I am so sorry for the loss of Matthew. His life was filled with so much value (those are his items and his love you've kept). Grief is one confusing and difficult journey.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you reading my poem.
Comment from Nanny 6
This poem takes one right into the scene. And shows the emotions of the person who's talking about all the contents behind the closet door... this is a Very good entry for the contest! Good luck
Judy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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This poem takes one right into the scene. And shows the emotions of the person who's talking about all the contents behind the closet door... this is a Very good entry for the contest! Good luck
Judy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thank you, for taking time to read and for the nice review.
