Comment from Carolyn Reaves

Exceptional

I loved it. Your story was entertaining and I could hear the voices saying the words. You did a great job of writing this in a humorous way, even though it is not a believable story, or at least I hope it is not true.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Thank you very much for the six stars, kind lady. It was a fun story to write. In real life, I don't think anyone is quite that dumb. LOL

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

You carried this story on so smoothly with dialogue only. It was a very enjoyable read.
I'd be upset too if Social Security said I was dead and stopped my check. That's be enough to cause a heart attack, and I would be. haha

Good luck in this contest. You did make me smile.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018

Thanks. Yeah, that would be terrible. I hope it never happens to either of us.

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

This is a great dialogue only story I really enjoyed readjng it and loved the ending.
You need to correct the 11th line-you're (you)
Good luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018

Thank you, and thanks for the catch. I will correct it at once. I appreciate any help I can get.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

I have a feeling that this woman is just not very bright... although she may be dangerous. lol Funny piece. GMG

never paid him much mind because what does he Know? - know.

Ma'mn, will you try something for me?- Ma'am?

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018

Thanks. Oops, glad you caught me boo-boos. I will edit and fix.

Comment from Scarbrems

Excellent

Well, this is a funny tale. I love the suggestions on how to check if you're dead or not. Yep, I can still see myself in the mirror ... guess I'm still alive. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Comment from Lady Jane

Excellent

Ghost(s) can't see themselves...

Now this gave me a chuckle, lol. But, what really did the husband intend to mean when telling his wife she was dead? Hmmm...I sense a sequel, LOL. Well written with great, solid dialogue. Good luck in the contest with this one, dear. It is fluid and the content made for a fun, lighthearted read. Good job and good luck, again :)
Janelle

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018

Thanks. I would guess the husband was heckling his wife about their sex life. You think maybe?

reply by Lady Jane on 28-Oct-2018

Haha, the old ?dead fish? analogy. I?m laughing - that is choice. I?ll bet that?s the ticket. Nicely done!

Comment from damommy

Excellent

LOL. I love this! She may need the funeral home after all if her husband doesn't stop giving her a hard time. You did well with this dialogue only. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018

Thank you. Yeah, he better watch out or might need the funeral home.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

tHIS HAS HAPPENED TO SO MANY PEOPLE iKNOW TOOK THEM FOREVER TO GET IT STRAIGHTENED OUT THEY SAID TO THEM COMPUTERS DONT LIE. WELL ID SO WHY ARE THEY STILL WALKING AROUND?

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018

Thank you. I like your thoughts on this story. I guess this really happens to some folks.

reply by country ranch writer on 28-Oct-2018

Smiles

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

I enjoyed this story until the unnecessary swipe at President Trump. He has kept all his promises and fulfilled his pledge to make America great again. Why do you hate him?

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018

Thanks. I know, and I'm sorry about the Trump bit. I Didn't mean it and just threw it in to add to the story.

Comment from Craigitar

Excellent

Ha ha! This is clever and humorous. Well written dialogue and story that carried me along to the funny conclusion. Good entry for the contest. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018

Thanks. I woke up this morning with that story in my head.