Magical Feet
I danced because of them...8 total reviews
Comment from Donka Kristeva
I love this. Very few words make a great message in this elegant and graceful poem. They convey the very effect of being "spellbound" when we watched those dancers.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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I love this. Very few words make a great message in this elegant and graceful poem. They convey the very effect of being "spellbound" when we watched those dancers.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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They truly were (and always will be!) the best, Donka...no question! :) ;) They were my inspiration for 17 years of performance dance (tap, ballet, and modern from ages 3 thru 20!) and, even now, I do so enjoy just dancing....music gets the heart pumping and the feet moving, sometimes unconsciously! :) :) Thanx for stopping in today, and may you have a wonderful week ahead of musically-inspired daydreams! :) :)
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And best wishes in the contest, May Fred and Gene tap on the judges' decisions....
Comment from jenintorre
I really love this. It is also why I danced too and am still dancing seventy years later. A brilliant entry for the dance competition.
Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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I really love this. It is also why I danced too and am still dancing seventy years later. A brilliant entry for the dance competition.
Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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They truly were (and always will be!) the best, Jen...no question! :) ;) They were my inspiration for 17 years of performance dance (tap, ballet, and modern from ages 3 thru 20!) and, even now, I do so enjoy just dancing....music gets the heart pumping and the feet moving, sometimes unconsciously! :) :) Thanx for stopping in today, and may you have a wonderful week ahead of musically-inspired daydreams! :) :)
Comment from writer_13
I love your poem. I was a great fan of Fred and Gene. Your words are perfect. I can see them dancing on tap or soft shoe. That is really cool. Good Job!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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I love your poem. I was a great fan of Fred and Gene. Your words are perfect. I can see them dancing on tap or soft shoe. That is really cool. Good Job!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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They truly were (and always will be!) the best, writer_13...no question! :) ;) They were my inspiration for 17 years of performance dance (tap, ballet, and modern from ages 3 thru 20!) and, even now, I do so enjoy just dancing....music gets the heart pumping and the feet moving, sometimes unconsciously! :) :) Thanx for stopping in today, and may you have a wonderful week ahead of musically-inspired daydreams! :) :)
Comment from Kelly Grim
This is splendid! Who better to write a poem about when the topic is dance then these two masters of dance! I like your second line and then your third line is clever and I like the liberty you take with punctuation... well done! Great title, great entry! Should do well!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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This is splendid! Who better to write a poem about when the topic is dance then these two masters of dance! I like your second line and then your third line is clever and I like the liberty you take with punctuation... well done! Great title, great entry! Should do well!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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They truly were (and always will be!) the best, Kelly...no question! :) ;) They were my inspiration for 17 years of performance dance (tap, ballet, and modern from ages 3 thru 20!) and, even now, I do so enjoy just dancing....music gets the heart pumping and the feet moving, sometimes unconsciously! :) :) Thanx for stopping in today, and may you have a wonderful week ahead of musically-inspired daydreams! :) :)
Comment from susand3022
While this poem was descriptive, and I expect I couldn't write anything better myself, it doesn't evoke the emotion that Fred and Gene do. When they dance one is glued to them, not wanting to miss a step! While this poem is very good, I just wish it made me feel the way they do. (I'm sure I couldn't do it!)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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While this poem was descriptive, and I expect I couldn't write anything better myself, it doesn't evoke the emotion that Fred and Gene do. When they dance one is glued to them, not wanting to miss a step! While this poem is very good, I just wish it made me feel the way they do. (I'm sure I couldn't do it!)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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thank you
Comment from Galactia
Hi
Excellent written 5'7'5 poem. You did a great job with the Magical feet. Picture represents poem well, you can see them dancing.
Great job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Hi
Excellent written 5'7'5 poem. You did a great job with the Magical feet. Picture represents poem well, you can see them dancing.
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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This is a 3-5-3 contest. Please be sure to check contest requirements and actual syllable count of a poem before reviewing. Thank you and have a good evening.
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Hi
Sorry i meant to say 3'5'3 Poem. My bad,
Regards
Tia
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a great little 3-5-3. It hit the mark on creating a sweet little tap dance for this writing prompt/contest. :) A fun entry. I hope you do well. Tap on into a top spot. Good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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What a great little 3-5-3. It hit the mark on creating a sweet little tap dance for this writing prompt/contest. :) A fun entry. I hope you do well. Tap on into a top spot. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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They truly were (and always will be!) the best, Cindy...no question! :) ;) They were my inspiration for 17 years of performance dance (tap, ballet, and modern from ages 3 thru 20!) and, even now, I do so enjoy just dancing....music gets the heart pumping and the feet moving, sometimes unconsciously! :) :) Thanx for stopping in today, and may you have a wonderful week ahead of musically-inspired daydreams! :) :)
Comment from Thomas Bowling
The two all-time best dancers. This is an excellent entry in the contest. You should do very well in the voting booth. I enter a lot of contests but seldom win. I hope you do better.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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The two all-time best dancers. This is an excellent entry in the contest. You should do very well in the voting booth. I enter a lot of contests but seldom win. I hope you do better.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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They truly were (and always will be!) the best, Thomas...no question! :) ;) They were my inspiration for 17 years of performance dance (tap, ballet, and modern from ages3 thru 20!) and, even now, I do so enjoy just dancing....music gets the heart pumping and the feet moving, sometimes unconsciously! :) :) Thanx for stopping in today, and may you have a wonderful week ahead of musically-inspired daydreams! :) :)
