Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, this Nature 3-5-3 made me smile and it is so cute too, those lady bugs certainly lift our spirits and your words brought the reality of the situation to us, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Thanks Dolly, glad you liked it. X

Comment from Karol Bond

Excellent

Very nicely done. I like the light hearted approach. The picture is a perfect choice for the piece. I'eve always loved ladybugs. They don"t bite and they're to cute to be creepy.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Many thanks.

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Many thanks

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, most clever author. Those naughty ladybugs seems to be enjoying themselves in the flowers though. lol

Great job and I wish you much luck in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Yay. It won first place. Great feeling isn't it? Thanks a lot Gloria for your kind wishes. Love. Jen.

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Sorry, made a mistake. It was the one before 'warning' that has won. I lied(not intentionally).

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

How many people get to see that happen? I enjoy reading poems that are light, and have strokes of imagination. This is a very different take on ladybugs. I wish you luck with your Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt entry.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018

Many thanks.

reply by victor 66 on 03-Nov-2018

You are most welcome.

Comment from Impromptu Scribe

Excellent

A good 3-5-3 example and a great entry for the 'Nature' contest accompanied by the perfect visual to reinforce the title. I love the way that you have used a beautiful shot from the natural world where what is going on in the big outdoors is perceived as perfectly normal. In sharp contrast and with great humour, you show how we humans with our psychological hang ups and entrenched political correctness, frown upon and get in a fuss at the very prospect of copulation in public :) Good luck in the contest. This is a winner :) Best wishes.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018

Thank you so much for your great review. Jen

reply by Impromptu Scribe on 03-Nov-2018

You are very welcome :) Best wishes

Comment from oorwull

Exceptional

Brilliant. Looked at the picture. Thought it out and was immediately impressed by the required brevity of words being able to assess it all . "Get a room....bug"
I'm still smiling....
Willie

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018

Thanks for your great comments and stars.

Comment from Six-Star Writer

Excellent

Really loved it. Very funny. Maybe she's a lady bug of the night. I'll bet she wears an itsy bitsy teensy weensy yellow polka dot bikini. Uh oh, now I'm seeing spots before my eyes.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018

A great, funny review, thanks

Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear mystery writer, cute, sweet, humorous poem about telling a lady...bug to get a room. The artwork was beautiful too, a close-up picture of ladybugs. Good luck in the contest. Dove

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 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018

Many thanks for your great review.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is evident even in this short form. Well done, Writer. not a lady at all, superbly rendered..

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 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2018

Thanks a lot Meeshu, my friend.