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Imagine That!11 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written children's rhyming poem. A brown cardboard box was always the best toy we could play with and we went everywhere we dream to go. The days when we use imagination to entertain ourselves.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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A very well-written children's rhyming poem. A brown cardboard box was always the best toy we could play with and we went everywhere we dream to go. The days when we use imagination to entertain ourselves.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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So true..I loved boxes, especially ones that I could fit into. Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from country ranch writer
Kids have a great imagination when they are young just give them a box and they are as happy as can be. They can go so many places and never lave home.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Kids have a great imagination when they are young just give them a box and they are as happy as can be. They can go so many places and never lave home.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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You are so right! My favorite toy when I was young. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet and jolly write for children and they would love every word here, this story should be in a book with some accompanying pictures, it would sell well, good luck with the contest, I really enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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This is a sweet and jolly write for children and they would love every word here, this story should be in a book with some accompanying pictures, it would sell well, good luck with the contest, I really enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I really enjoy writing for children, it's my first love and would love to see something published someday. Thanks so much for taking time to read and review. :)
Comment from AngieDee
I love your poem, it was so perfect for the contest. I could see it as a great children's book. I felt it should have gotten a higher ranking. Congratulations .
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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I love your poem, it was so perfect for the contest. I could see it as a great children's book. I felt it should have gotten a higher ranking. Congratulations .
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words. I really love writing for children and would love to see something published someday. Thanks so much for taking time to read my poem.
Comment from Debbie Pope
Children will like this. I like this. You do a good job with the rhythm. To me, that is more important than rhyming for children. It's the sing song nature that appeals to children. I can hear me reading this aloud to my grandchildren.
Your words are simple, too, as they should be. And you deal with topics that children adore. You take them on quite a fun journey in their cardboard box.
You really do everything right. You should do very well in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Children will like this. I like this. You do a good job with the rhythm. To me, that is more important than rhyming for children. It's the sing song nature that appeals to children. I can hear me reading this aloud to my grandchildren.
Your words are simple, too, as they should be. And you deal with topics that children adore. You take them on quite a fun journey in their cardboard box.
You really do everything right. You should do very well in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Thank you for such a nice review. I placed 2nd in the contest. :)
Comment from DonandVicki
I love your childrens poem, I think that there should be more of it on this site. I hope that you use this clever poem in making a book to expose more children to poetry.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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I love your childrens poem, I think that there should be more of it on this site. I hope that you use this clever poem in making a book to expose more children to poetry.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Thank you for your kind words and encouragement. :)
Comment from kahpot
An excellent children's poem, allowing them to use their imagination and to be playing safely outside, this is very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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An excellent children's poem, allowing them to use their imagination and to be playing safely outside, this is very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Thank you such a nice review. :)
Comment from Sugarray77
Way to go on this great children's verse. I really enjoyed the happy view the author penned in regards to a box. It does seem that a box is the ultimate toy for little ones. Your rhyme and meter were good and it flowed well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Way to go on this great children's verse. I really enjoyed the happy view the author penned in regards to a box. It does seem that a box is the ultimate toy for little ones. Your rhyme and meter were good and it flowed well. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Thank you for your review. I'm always happy to hear from you. :)
Comment from A. Troutman
This was a very well written poem. It is structured fantastically, and it's tone captures the children's imagination. I love how you revealed the bus/ship/etc is a cardboard box. Cardboard was a favorite staple of my childhood, and I'm glad others appreciate it as well. :)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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This was a very well written poem. It is structured fantastically, and it's tone captures the children's imagination. I love how you revealed the bus/ship/etc is a cardboard box. Cardboard was a favorite staple of my childhood, and I'm glad others appreciate it as well. :)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Thank you for such a nice review. I loved cardboard boxes when I was little( wish I could still fit into them now. Lol) I really appreciate you taking time to read and review.
Comment from tfawcus
Lovely. A cardboard box can be anything you want it to be, when you have the imagination of a child. Such an upbeat poem - perfect rhythm, and written in a way that is sure to appeal to a youngster.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Lovely. A cardboard box can be anything you want it to be, when you have the imagination of a child. Such an upbeat poem - perfect rhythm, and written in a way that is sure to appeal to a youngster.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Thank you for your kind words.:)
