Til Death and Beyond
A Days Poem19 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
No wonder this is the contest winner, congrats on that mike. This is a beautiful days poem, lovely rhyming, and sadly romantic story. Beautiful presentation,
cheers,
valda
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No wonder this is the contest winner, congrats on that mike. This is a beautiful days poem, lovely rhyming, and sadly romantic story. Beautiful presentation,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 25-Nov-2018
Comment from nordicgirl
This was so beautiful and then just heartbreaking really. But a touchingbweite and story that will linger in my heart for a long, long time. You have my vote for this exceptional write. NG
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This was so beautiful and then just heartbreaking really. But a touchingbweite and story that will linger in my heart for a long, long time. You have my vote for this exceptional write. NG
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I don't know what it is about this poem, but it really got to me. It started out exquisitely beautiful, and ... the ending? Such a deep, deep love that could not let go. So many mixed emotions in my head. Bottom line: Beautifully and perfectly illustrated, which set into motion the words of your poem. I loved the rhyme and was so moved by your poem. 'Deeply moved'. Maybe that is the emotion that best describes what I am feeling. An exceptional work!
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I don't know what it is about this poem, but it really got to me. It started out exquisitely beautiful, and ... the ending? Such a deep, deep love that could not let go. So many mixed emotions in my head. Bottom line: Beautifully and perfectly illustrated, which set into motion the words of your poem. I loved the rhyme and was so moved by your poem. 'Deeply moved'. Maybe that is the emotion that best describes what I am feeling. An exceptional work!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
Comment from BOO ghost
Like the picture.
Very romantic. But now they can be together, in the grave.
The afterlife beckons him and calls.
Some interesting twist on the words that I can juggle in my transparent mind.
Often, poems like this get overlooked. This one full of romance and feelings.
BOO-tastic!
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Like the picture.
Very romantic. But now they can be together, in the grave.
The afterlife beckons him and calls.
Some interesting twist on the words that I can juggle in my transparent mind.
Often, poems like this get overlooked. This one full of romance and feelings.
BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
Comment from Liz O'Neill
There is a poignant juxtaposition in this theme. You use4 very strong metaphors which create vivid imagery. This actually carries a cautionary tale. It is hoped that the reader will pause to reflect on their losses and ways of coping. This actually is all too common as a permanent solution to a temporary moment in a lifetime. Well written.
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There is a poignant juxtaposition in this theme. You use4 very strong metaphors which create vivid imagery. This actually carries a cautionary tale. It is hoped that the reader will pause to reflect on their losses and ways of coping. This actually is all too common as a permanent solution to a temporary moment in a lifetime. Well written.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
Comment from webfoot
this is a beautiful poem that evokes the "classical poets" for me.
the rhyming scheme works very well with these sentiments.
What is a "days poem". Is this another poetic form that I need to learn about ?
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this is a beautiful poem that evokes the "classical poets" for me.
the rhyming scheme works very well with these sentiments.
What is a "days poem". Is this another poetic form that I need to learn about ?
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
Comment from Jean Hornby
Aww what a beautiful love story . This is so full of love but so very sad how he ends his life in hope to be reunited with his wife . Love is a strong emotion that has two sides , it is beautiful when things are going well but painful when they are not . We have all experienced the two sides of love , some more than others like ' till death beyond '
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Aww what a beautiful love story . This is so full of love but so very sad how he ends his life in hope to be reunited with his wife . Love is a strong emotion that has two sides , it is beautiful when things are going well but painful when they are not . We have all experienced the two sides of love , some more than others like ' till death beyond '
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
Comment from LIJ Red
The couplets rhyme and the half lines monorhyme, and Days poems are not a bad form. Not a really happy happy joy joy theme, but one can't grade on content...excellent
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The couplets rhyme and the half lines monorhyme, and Days poems are not a bad form. Not a really happy happy joy joy theme, but one can't grade on content...excellent
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
Comment from DonandVicki
A so sad poem with a tragic twist at the end. Some say that suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem, BUT If you lose the love of your life, there may not be a solution.
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A so sad poem with a tragic twist at the end. Some say that suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem, BUT If you lose the love of your life, there may not be a solution.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have known couples that when one dies the remaining partner couldn't bare to continue living. I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck.
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I have known couples that when one dies the remaining partner couldn't bare to continue living. I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
