Comment from pearlydoo

Excellent

Nicely done. Apt 666 gives smoky darkness an unfortunate scene for many entertainment draw fitting. Apt 777 inviting peaceful bright. Entertainment tone announced upon entry. Good writing fort the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

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Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Yikes, what a haunted and scary apartment to rent. Your story surely painted all of the horrors of the amenities. I chuckled when I read the line that mentions vampire tendencies.

Well, hopefully you would get potential vampire tenants. lol.

Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

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Comment from writer_13

Excellent

I thought that you fulfilled the requirements for this contest very well. You did not use the words heaven or hell in your ads but you made it very clear what apartments the ads were for in a very creative way.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018

Thank you