Snowfall in June
A sight to behold9 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the first fluffy snow flakes swifting down to earth until there is only white to see as far as the eyes can see. A winter wonderland to enjoy.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the first fluffy snow flakes swifting down to earth until there is only white to see as far as the eyes can see. A winter wonderland to enjoy.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Sandra,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from Jaye Bennett
Very nice. An accurate description of the annual cottonwood snowfall of seeds. Anathema to those who are allergic to them. The "fluffy puffs" is a mild tongue-twister, but still good 5-7-5 poem.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Very nice. An accurate description of the annual cottonwood snowfall of seeds. Anathema to those who are allergic to them. The "fluffy puffs" is a mild tongue-twister, but still good 5-7-5 poem.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
Jaye,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Airborne, has the correct formatting and gives the reader another definition of snowflakes. As delightful as they are in free fall, they cause me grief as they accumulate here.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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This 5-7-5, Airborne, has the correct formatting and gives the reader another definition of snowflakes. As delightful as they are in free fall, they cause me grief as they accumulate here.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Bill,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a lovely 5-7-5. The picture shows the cotton clearly, and you're right, it does look like snow. Your words are equally picturesque, the imagery puts us in the picture perfectly. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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This is a lovely 5-7-5. The picture shows the cotton clearly, and you're right, it does look like snow. Your words are equally picturesque, the imagery puts us in the picture perfectly. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
Sandra,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from Raul1
The picture is beautiful. I never knew that Cottonwood trees existed. Funny how you learn things when you start reading something by someone who wrote it. This piece I like the most, because it talks about certain trees. Nice poem! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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The picture is beautiful. I never knew that Cottonwood trees existed. Funny how you learn things when you start reading something by someone who wrote it. This piece I like the most, because it talks about certain trees. Nice poem! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Raul,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
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You're welcome
Comment from DonandVicki
I enjoyed reading your authors notes as much as your 5-7-5. The poem is very good but you may get some negative feedback on the rhyme of all three lines. Nevertheless I liked your work.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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I enjoyed reading your authors notes as much as your 5-7-5. The poem is very good but you may get some negative feedback on the rhyme of all three lines. Nevertheless I liked your work.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Donald,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated. I guess the rhyming was the reason it didn't place.
Eugene
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Something I have never seen because we do not have cotton trees where I live and this must be quite a sight, like a snowy day in the warm, an atmospheric write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Something I have never seen because we do not have cotton trees where I live and this must be quite a sight, like a snowy day in the warm, an atmospheric write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
Dolly,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from Sugarray77
Wow, I love it. The photo really makes this poem, because it really looks like snow, not the blooms from the cottonwood. Good syllable count and presentation. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Wow, I love it. The photo really makes this poem, because it really looks like snow, not the blooms from the cottonwood. Good syllable count and presentation. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
Sugarray77,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Oh, what a lovely sight these "cottonwood" trees are. I love your title, "Snowfall in June." Nature grants us so much inspiration to write about. I like your description of "snow like cotton seeds take flight..." Good luck in the contest. You've chosen a unique topic and your format looks well crafted. :)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Oh, what a lovely sight these "cottonwood" trees are. I love your title, "Snowfall in June." Nature grants us so much inspiration to write about. I like your description of "snow like cotton seeds take flight..." Good luck in the contest. You've chosen a unique topic and your format looks well crafted. :)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
Cindy,
Thank you for your encouraging review. Your comments are greatly appreciated. And thanks for the suggested title change.
Eugene
