Back in time
Too late now22 total reviews
Comment from Wetbelly01
Oh if only we could do such a thing... Alas, it's just not to be I guess.
Your fine poem flows along with a fine rhythm and rhyme.
My compliments, well done as far as I'm concerned!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Oh if only we could do such a thing... Alas, it's just not to be I guess.
Your fine poem flows along with a fine rhythm and rhyme.
My compliments, well done as far as I'm concerned!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from kahpot
Yes the life we could have had, had we only known what we have learned along the way, an excellent poem and artwork, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Yes the life we could have had, had we only known what we have learned along the way, an excellent poem and artwork, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Spitfire
Excellent entry with the required rhyme scheme. The thoughts resonate with all of us, I'm guessing. Hopefully, the majority learn from their bad choices and try to undo the damage, if possible.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Excellent entry with the required rhyme scheme. The thoughts resonate with all of us, I'm guessing. Hopefully, the majority learn from their bad choices and try to undo the damage, if possible.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. The reader
pondered on the thought "we can't change the past". The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork goes well with the theme and words
of this poem.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. The reader
pondered on the thought "we can't change the past". The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork goes well with the theme and words
of this poem.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from fayesh
I think you expressed yourself well; however, the second stanza needs another line to rhyme with "time" How about "I have screwed big time/Without reason or rhyme."
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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I think you expressed yourself well; however, the second stanza needs another line to rhyme with "time" How about "I have screwed big time/Without reason or rhyme."
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Very good suggestion. Thanks.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the clock that keeps ticking and when we come to age we would like to turn the clock back and try to change the mistakes that we made but it is too late to change anything.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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A very well-written poem about the clock that keeps ticking and when we come to age we would like to turn the clock back and try to change the mistakes that we made but it is too late to change anything.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Many thanks Sandra.
Comment from RodG
We all have regrets, and as we grow older we often echo the sentiments of the. speaker here. Who hasn't "screwed up bigtime"? I especially like your closing couplet.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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We all have regrets, and as we grow older we often echo the sentiments of the. speaker here. Who hasn't "screwed up bigtime"? I especially like your closing couplet.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks going back in time and starting life anew, in a different style, without mistakes, righteously and playing all games rightly not like today a full life in mistakes; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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This speaks going back in time and starting life anew, in a different style, without mistakes, righteously and playing all games rightly not like today a full life in mistakes; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Many thanks
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Comment from Kathleen S.
Very interesting poem and one that people can relate to. At times, there are choices that make us feel this way, but there is always something better on the horizon. With age comes wisdom... may your tomorrow be bright.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Very interesting poem and one that people can relate to. At times, there are choices that make us feel this way, but there is always something better on the horizon. With age comes wisdom... may your tomorrow be bright.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Many thanks Kathleen.
Comment from Sugarray77
Wow, a great entry for the Tick Tock writing prompt. I enjoyed your read and can relate very well.... I think we all can.... Good presentation and artwork enhance this lovely verse..
Melissa
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Wow, a great entry for the Tick Tock writing prompt. I enjoyed your read and can relate very well.... I think we all can.... Good presentation and artwork enhance this lovely verse..
Melissa
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Many thanks
