Dreams of Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Not Perfectly Scripted"A word collage about my life.
6 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a shorter piece than some of the others, but no less important. We have to go with flow as we used to say in the '60's. To be adaptable to life and the curves thrown at us makes us more mature and flexible. Our lives are written moment to moment. Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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This is a shorter piece than some of the others, but no less important. We have to go with flow as we used to say in the '60's. To be adaptable to life and the curves thrown at us makes us more mature and flexible. Our lives are written moment to moment. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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I thank you very much for the wonderful stars and the review. Have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Rene Ravensdale
That's Amazing!
Describing life to a T.
You plan and plan, but what happens is always out of hand!
Rhyme is very good and so right.
I hope to read more of your work!
Keep on the writing !
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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That's Amazing!
Describing life to a T.
You plan and plan, but what happens is always out of hand!
Rhyme is very good and so right.
I hope to read more of your work!
Keep on the writing !
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thank you, I am so grateful for your review and the wonderful stars. Hope to post some more writing soon. Have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Anne Mabley
You have portrayed an excellent message in a well written poem. It flows so smoothly. You capture so much in a short verse leaving the reader with a smile. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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You have portrayed an excellent message in a well written poem. It flows so smoothly. You capture so much in a short verse leaving the reader with a smile. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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I am deeply honored and humbled by the six stars and your review. Thank you very much.
Comment from Sugarray77
I really like this verse. Part of happiness is enjoying and being content with what we have. Your appreciative verse is encouraging to others. Well developed presentation and artwork. Good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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I really like this verse. Part of happiness is enjoying and being content with what we have. Your appreciative verse is encouraging to others. Well developed presentation and artwork. Good luck.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Thank you. I am honored by the stars, your comments and the well wishes.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I thoroughly enjoyed hearing your thoughts. I like your adaptability. This letting go of plans shows a wisdom about you that is worth sharing in a poem.
I like your use of a "plausible plot" to describe what maps your life now. You found it, and you love it, even though it is not the plan you started with. We can all relate to the imaginings that you reference early in the poem. So many of us never let go of those dreams and therefore never reach satisfaction in life.
Your words are inspirational. Thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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I thoroughly enjoyed hearing your thoughts. I like your adaptability. This letting go of plans shows a wisdom about you that is worth sharing in a poem.
I like your use of a "plausible plot" to describe what maps your life now. You found it, and you love it, even though it is not the plan you started with. We can all relate to the imaginings that you reference early in the poem. So many of us never let go of those dreams and therefore never reach satisfaction in life.
Your words are inspirational. Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Thank you so very much for the stars and the comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image and presentation.
-I like your poem and topic.
-It flows well as you tell a story
and use effective rhyme meter.
-You have a good hook
in the opening line.
-I like the image of building
your future in sand.
-I agree with you about not
going back to redo your past.
-I like the last line very much.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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-A good image and presentation.
-I like your poem and topic.
-It flows well as you tell a story
and use effective rhyme meter.
-You have a good hook
in the opening line.
-I like the image of building
your future in sand.
-I agree with you about not
going back to redo your past.
-I like the last line very much.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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Thank you so very much for the excellent rating and the comments in your review. I appreciate them very much.
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You are very welcome.