Autumn Brings
3-5-3 poem contest2 total reviews
Comment from jmshumate
A nice poem, and I can feel the fresh invigorating autumn air now, as I have read those words, your poem made me relive the experience of breathing in the autumn air. Hard to do in such few syllables. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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A nice poem, and I can feel the fresh invigorating autumn air now, as I have read those words, your poem made me relive the experience of breathing in the autumn air. Hard to do in such few syllables. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this mystery writer. I just read a poem by Gloria that stated that winter is the calmest season, a time for reflection. You are right. autumn is the invigorating season. It's such a cool, fresh relief from summer.
My only correction is to that autumn does not take a capital letter in line three.
Otherwise, it is a perfect poem. Nice entry.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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I like this mystery writer. I just read a poem by Gloria that stated that winter is the calmest season, a time for reflection. You are right. autumn is the invigorating season. It's such a cool, fresh relief from summer.
My only correction is to that autumn does not take a capital letter in line three.
Otherwise, it is a perfect poem. Nice entry.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thank you for your review
