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I Don't See No Cows

Must be a hoax

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet, I gave you your 7th vote .. I thought your take was interesting . Cows farts have a negative side effect .

Maybe it is time that countries like America and Australia cut down on their meat in take .. too much meat in a diet is not healthy anyway .

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Aww ... thanks so much. Most appreciated. Delighted you liked my piece. Agree with your insights. :))
Comment from Galactia
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LOL

I think you fulfilled this prompt well. Perfect syllable count of 3'5'3 .

Good luck in the contest, this is a strong entry.

Great job
Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018

Comment from rama devi
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It's horrendous how cows are treated and also how raising so many clustered together is indeed a major cause of global warming. Vegetarianism and veganism would help our planet a lot!
(I am vegetarian but not yet fully vegan).

Dairy air makes a fine satori effect...satirical and true.

I suggest not capping the D but that is optional.

Good formatting to highlight the delivery. Fine presentaiton too.

Good luck! It is a unique response to the contest prompt.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    So pleased you enjoyed. Yes, not capping the "D" is a good idea. Don't know why I did. Thanks for catching it. :))
reply by rama devi on 05-Dec-2018
    Happy to help :-)))
Comment from tfawcus
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There aren't many of these 3-line poems that hit my funny-bone, but this one did. It's an absolute beauty! Mind you, those burly steers in the picture don't have a cute little derriere between them!

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    Beauty is in the eye, yes? Glad you enjoyed. Thanks a million. :))